Reviews for Oh, how it hurts
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
FredHermione over FredAngelina any day! XD

Love that it's one sided and angsty. I could see Hermione stewing over something like this until she just explodes all over them...now THAT would be awesome to read! ...gotta go find me some of that at some point :D
lowi chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Really nice! A slightly angsty fredhermione is never wrong, in my opinion! :D

Favourite lines were: "(no, WeasleyWeasleyWeasleyWeasley, dammit!)"
Morghen chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Asdfghjkl, *grumbles* why do you people feel the need to make me like Fredmione? Every time I read a Fredmione, I get a million plot bunnies... And I don't wanna write them!

:P

Anyway, this was really angsty and good! It sucks to like someone who is "perfect" with someone else... I really hate Angelina in this and usually she's one of those characters I don't care either way about. I liked the subtle role that George played in this. Fredmione does roll off the tongue nicely, doesn't it? Better than Ronmione or even Percemione... :P

"And even now

it feels comfortable

& —in that "this-could-be-something-more" way—"

Loved that part!

:)

-Morghen
controlled climb chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Aw, Mew! First off, thanks so much :3 I must admit that I was pleasantly surprised to see a Fremione for you... and my name in the summary too! :'D

asldfjasldfj ANGELINAA D: -bites- Why must she ruin everything? D: Yes, 'Mione is 100% better with him... but obviously Angelina fails at life and doesn't know when to give up :( /crycrykri

I'm so glad I compel you to write Fremione... because this turned out fantastically :3 Really, I absolutely loove this! *favourites*

His name sounds good next to hers, don't it? I'm afraid that ... Fregelina or something just don't sound so goood ;)

The little bit with George making his appearance was really sweet xD Loved that.

Ooh. This was so lovely and sad :( Tear tear. Argh. You make me hate Angelina so much ;~;

YET ANOTHER BRILLIANT FREEVERSE, MEW. I absolutely loveloveloved it :3

Thank yooou! And have a great New Years :3
Panny chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Very nice. I'm not usually one for poetry but I really like this and it captured that possible dynamic well.