Reviews for Oh, how it hurts
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
FredHermione over FredAngelina any day! XD

Love that it's one sided and angsty. I could see Hermione stewing over something like this until she just explodes all over THAT would be awesome to read! ...gotta go find me some of that at some point :D
lowi chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Really nice! A slightly angsty fredhermione is never wrong, in my opinion! :D

Favourite lines were: "(no, WeasleyWeasleyWeasleyWeasley, dammit!)"
Morghen chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Asdfghjkl, *grumbles* why do you people feel the need to make me like Fredmione? Every time I read a Fredmione, I get a million plot bunnies... And I don't wanna write them!


Anyway, this was really angsty and good! It sucks to like someone who is "perfect" with someone else... I really hate Angelina in this and usually she's one of those characters I don't care either way about. I liked the subtle role that George played in this. Fredmione does roll off the tongue nicely, doesn't it? Better than Ronmione or even Percemione... :P

"And even now

it feels comfortable

& —in that "this-could-be-something-more" way—"

Loved that part!


controlled climb chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Aw, Mew! First off, thanks so much :3 I must admit that I was pleasantly surprised to see a Fremione for you... and my name in the summary too! :'D

asldfjasldfj ANGELINAA D: -bites- Why must she ruin everything? D: Yes, 'Mione is 100% better with him... but obviously Angelina fails at life and doesn't know when to give up :( /crycrykri

I'm so glad I compel you to write Fremione... because this turned out fantastically :3 Really, I absolutely loove this! *favourites*

His name sounds good next to hers, don't it? I'm afraid that ... Fregelina or something just don't sound so goood ;)

The little bit with George making his appearance was really sweet xD Loved that.

Ooh. This was so lovely and sad :( Tear tear. Argh. You make me hate Angelina so much ;~;

YET ANOTHER BRILLIANT FREEVERSE, MEW. I absolutely loveloveloved it :3

Thank yooou! And have a great New Years :3
Panny chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Very nice. I'm not usually one for poetry but I really like this and it captured that possible dynamic well.