Reviews for Her Son, Her Hero
Nat chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Love it!
wisegirl299 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
*tear* this is something Hera would luv (I'm still mad at her poor Percy)
tkdprincess96 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
loved the story. little percy is absolutely adorable. keep writing!
The Ice Within chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
THAT WAS SO TOUCHING, AWESOME.

I LOVED IT!
storm-brain chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
This story was nominated for the Verita award.

The nominator said: This fic really gets into what Sally would be feeling, and what her attitude toward her son is during his many adventures. Kudoes to the author~ ;)

For more information see fanmortals dot webs dot com.

QK

Storm
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Kewl~~ ;)
The Blazing Phoenix chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Sorry for the late review. 8D

You switch between past and present tense, as I've told you before. Work on that. :D

But this story was really sweet. :) Writing a Mother/Son fic while adding a bit of Posally.

Beautiful.

Dawn
m y e h chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Holy crap. FIRST fanfic? SERIOUSLY? My first sucked so much...
Jessavi chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
It was really good for your first fanfic, Epitome. :) Seriously, it's way better than my own (it was deleted, out of shame).

There was a couple of mistakes here and there - mostly problems with the tenses and confusing sentences - but as this is an old work and you're bound to have improved, I can't really judge you on that.

Keep writing,

Jess
the ghost king chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Nicely written! And this is your first fanfic! :D

-claps-
Forever.N.Always.X chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
That was actually amazing. It was really good, written very well and all in character. I have nothing bad to say about it.

This is probably the best story I have read like this, and doesnt need to be in detail, its quite effective the way it is. )

~iiLoveMystiForever.X
maidenfairfridays chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
This is your first story? You amaze me. Most stories at first are pretty bad. :P Apparently, you have potential to become a great author. Notice I didn't say writer. That's reserved for the official writer. :P

xoxo, Diana
AdorableElephant chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Wow, this was awesome! This was really good for a first fic! My first fanfic was horrible! x) Great job. I think that's exactly how Sally would have thought!
Lieutenant Of Artemis chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
HAI :D Allie, here.

'Happy 2011!' ...First fanfic. Wowza. A bit shocked, there. It was well-written, characters IC, Percy was cute, and whatnot :) This is really good for your first fanfiction.

The only complaints are:

- {"She believes Percy would eventually learn at the right time."}

That was in present-tense. The others are in past-tense. Change that?

- Same thing near the end.

- {"Fine." He muttered, glaring at the floor."

Period into comma? :D

- You have a couple more of this mistake.

But that's just me, being nitpicky. So, all in all, very well done for your first fanfic.

Signed,

- Allie
taylorlautnerswifey chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Aww, that's so sweet!
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