Reviews for Just the Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ak, please continue! I realy like the story! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Interesting. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() Woah that weird moment when you realize that if Arthur is really Vesper One (as I like to think) then X is Amy and Dans half brother... Hmmmmm |
![]() ![]() Not only did Amy start dating again but it was Ians fault :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm reviewing! Can I see the beginning of the next chapter? Awesome story, by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I really like Jonah's embarrassing story ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm I'm not exactly used to truth or dare without Ian and Amy getting a kiss or closet dare or a crush truth but since they're together they can't exactly do that... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Fianlly updated! The truth and sarea were real good and not to cliche. Hats of to you! And thanks for not making two eleven yr olds make out! I hate it it when peeps do that. Yay yay yay yay yay gay yay yay yay! Update sooner then soon! |
![]() ![]() NO! |
![]() ![]() i used to read this then i lost track of what chapter i was on so i stopped but now i'm gonna read it all over again |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good, but your killing me with all of your: 1 Spelling mistakes 2 Grammar mistakes 3 You repeat words and make the sentence not make sense Here are your options: 1 Get a freaking beta 2 Proofread |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great. What Dan said was hilarious! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know how you feel I can't write mine either. I think it should end with some kind of Ian/Amy moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LUV this story. It's awesome! You have to keep going! Please, please, please, please, please? |