Reviews for Harry Potter and the Hidden Truth
ParadoxTheory374 chapter 33 . 8/31
Pathetic Harry as always, just can't stand these types.
ParadoxTheory374 chapter 1 . 8/31
Always find it pathetic how Harry that has to be the good guy
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 34 . 8/31
Enjoyed this story a lot.
Bronze chapter 13 . 8/18
In this chapter you hinted that Victoria is pregnant which confuses me greatly. Everything I know about Vampires says they can't do that as they are dead and their reproductive organs no long function. Thus I'm left confused unless in your story world they can. And that must be it or Victoria wouldn't be pregnant. I'm waiting to read Harry reaction to finding out that little fact. That should prove very interesting.
major wallace chapter 34 . 8/16
Nice work
Bronze chapter 12 . 8/14
Ya know, when the toad returns, and if she has her way she will, she could very easily have an unfortunate. She could accidently meet Agog or one of his family in thee Forbidden Forest and no one would ever find thee body. Though, she might upset their digestive systems. But who knows, liquefaction may just solve that little draw back. And maybe with a little luck, maybe Fudge would join her on the menu.
Bronze chapter 11 . 8/4
As another author said in one of his/her stories " flames are for roasting. " I happen to totally agree with that. I've heard of authors quitting because of it. If I don't like something the author(s) written I stop reading it but never flame him/her. I don't like reading slash so if I start one only to find out later it is, I tell the author POLITELY and stop. I want people to write so flaming is counterproductive.
BROMBROS chapter 1 . 7/25
I truly hope that you do a sequel to this amazing story I really enjoyed it
BROMBROS chapter 15 . 7/25
I love how you put the chapter I just finished reading at the end of the chapter. Enjoying this story.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/14
The dialogue between your wish- fulfillment Gary Stu and Daphne is a bit “ bow-chicka-bow-wow”, but cheesy proto-porn with toilet-paper thin plot IS a valid style choice.
Hdsf chapter 4 . 7/13
Your a fucking retard
J. El Lions Lohn Caesar chapter 2 . 7/7
Just a heads up, when explaining the origins of Victoria you say her mother died three years before she was born which doesn't quite add up
Bronze chapter 3 . 6/25
Slow roast Fumblemort in his office maybe? That should be good for stress relief! Now normally I'd call Fumblemort's little bird club the flaming squab but as Harry has two Phoenixes and I don't wish to be insulting to them I won't. But Fumblemort and his little club are very like what my late brother use to, Useless as tits on a bull. 99% of the time they sit around DISCUSSING what to do instead of doing it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25
Well, when your own family turns on you why would you stay? James sure as hell made his feels known towards Harry. But then this isn't thee first time I've read something like this. In a similar story Harry was a squib I think. Vultureworst came when James and Lily weren't home and Harry saved his brother with a hand mirror. He reflected thee killing curse back but the mirror exploded cutting his brother. No one would believe Harry nor would they even bother to test it out. So, Harry left. No real surprise there.
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 6/24
Muy Buen Comienzo!
Me Encanto!
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