|Reviews for Moondance|
| Candice chapter 24 . 2/15
This is the third time i've read this story so far and even though u may not finish it, it's one of my favs. I understand not having the will to continue and frankly, thats fine.
Now, to vent: Jacob was annoying the entire time. Also couldn't understand why people kept encouraging Bella to call him and contact him when he's the one being unreasonable. And why would she invite him to the party? Wouldn't his smell be too distracting to the vamps? Shouldn't Bella at least reward her vampire adoptive family with a pleasant smelling house since they are going thru all this trouble to gift her with a graduation party. She and jake can do something together some other time. Lol. No idea why i felt the need to share that but jake's kinda irritating with his tantrums and temper. But anyway, great story telling.
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/10
Finish this story!
| ccube01 chapter 24 . 1/24
wonderful story and i know you taking the whole relationship slow but exactly how slow are you planning on going. like maybe 50 chapter before they even kiss. it been too long and nothing has happen. am really loving the story but it started to feel like a trilogy novel or something.
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/22
You promised you wouldn't leave us and abandon this amazing story! :'(
| FreakGenius chapter 1 . 1/7
Man... Two years and no update. It's quite the bummer really. This story is amazing. The gradual build up between the characters is perfect, glad it's going at this pace. It's realistic, it's refreshing, it's beautiful. I love how their emotions are evolving and your writing style is great. It saddens me to think that this story's probably been forgotten. It feels like the real stuff is barely about to begin. I really hope your absence is just writer's block and that one day you'll return with a huge "Guess whooo's baaack?" I know I'm guilty of doing that a few times on my own stories. But they don't compare to the level of epic that this one reaches. Your writing is unbelievable and I do so hope that you'll return soon!
| flubbywhale chapter 24 . 1/6
Wow. I'm so glad that i dedicated the last week of my Christmas holidays to reading this, it was awesome! It had me crying my eyes out and laughing my head off, I really hope you pick it back up and finish it because it's one of the best fanfics I've ever read.
Thanks for keeping me entertained :)
| freya fatal chapter 24 . 1/2
This has to be one of my favourite fanfics. I like that it's not rushed and the relationship between Alice and Bella is getting stronger with time. I'm quite sad that you haven't updated in so long and I'd like to think you'll do so soon!
| nikalex chapter 24 . 12/4/2013
that was an amazing story so far... seeing the last date of ur update, i doubt that u will catch up with it again... but i really wished u could...
u have ended it in a really cliff...
i have the feling that now alice knows that amara is jasper's mate and bella hers and she tries to ignore it.. not wannting to destroy her relationship with bella...
i just wished u could continue the story :/
| SimplySupreme chapter 24 . 11/17/2013
Well, it seems you've been on a really long break here, but I just thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed reading this. In your author's notes, you said that lots of people had complained about how slow the Bellice was going, but I have to say that I liked it a lot. It was refreshing, nice, and realistic, and I'm totally addicted to this story. You did a good job with it. I especially enjoyed this last chapter, and how Bella made up with Jake. I also find it adorable when Alice gets flustered about how much she likes Bella. :P
Anywho, I'm glad you posted this, even if you didn't finish it. It was definitely worth reading.
| natcityjp chapter 24 . 11/5/2013
Aww, such a good story. Wish it was still going. Thx for the good story,
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/3/2013
Okay, at this point Bella is too oblivious to be believeable. She needs to wake up and realize her own emotions pretty soon.
| Quetz chapter 24 . 10/30/2013
Err... frustrated much?
Don't get me wrong your story is amazing with a capital A. Really, I love the slow pace for their relationship, it makes much more sense than love in two days. And your writing style is easy going, real smooth and an overall pleasure to read. Your characters are also very well written and I'm really glad for that too.
But... why the long wait? We've been such good readers (most of the time) and been patient with your awesome story so... would you consider finishing it sometime? For the sake of my sanity if anything else? I would pay to have the end of this particular story ya know? (well a little, student here)
I know that you have a life and honestly I'm glad you do. Life is important and I will not make you feel guilty for having one. But if by some chance you find some time maybe you could write for this? It would be truly appreciated.
In the meantime, take care. Much love!
| Snow chapter 24 . 9/17/2013
Woahhhh keep writing this is great please please keep writing don't stop
| DarkSageofKanoha chapter 24 . 8/30/2013
dude, serious continue, OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN LIKE THE DOG YOU ARE AND MAKE YOU! just kidding. please start posting new chapters soon
| SMFirefly chapter 24 . 8/13/2013
I finally find a truly good Alice and Bella story then realize that over a year has gone by since there was an update. sigh!
The pace of their relationship in this story is realistic, so don't worry about that.
You know, it's been long enough, and the story is almost at a place that you could switch perspectives if you wanted to and begin alternating it. The characters have almost reached a point that the reader would benefit and enjoy the evolution of the relationship from both sides. It might also be a point for you to "re-see" the story, if you are suffering from writer's block. Just some suggestions for you. I really do hope that you continue this story, it has potential to lend that "epic" feel to it, if you keep going.
I think Moondance may be the only Twilight story to grace my favorites. Please come back to your story and to your readers!