Reviews for Breaking Patterns
deBurca chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Very interesting story, thank you for sharing. Never would have thought of the ending. Well written and in Zelazny's style, as a previous poster noted.
Infelicity chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
So very, very, Fiona. Would love many more chapters of this but really, it's exactly what it needs to be. Thank you for creating this.
Set chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
Ouch. Well written.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Oh well done. I would say that this is not only enjoyable but a very accurate story for the most part. I disagree that flora would help Fiona to this degree but everything else was spot on!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
This does deserve more reviews...! Thank you for sharing...!
J.J. McCampbell chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Style is reminiscent of Zelazny, perhaps due to the borrowing of certain scenes from the original books. Overall I liked the effort, but I was actually hoping for a longer piece. Writer shows promise, keep up the writing!
Pyriel CZ chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Interesting. The end surprised me, but it is Fiona, right? So IC :-)