Reviews for Breaking Patterns
Set chapter 1 . 4/16
Ouch. Well written.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Oh well done. I would say that this is not only enjoyable but a very accurate story for the most part. I disagree that flora would help Fiona to this degree but everything else was spot on!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
This does deserve more reviews...! Thank you for sharing...!
J.J. McCampbell chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Style is reminiscent of Zelazny, perhaps due to the borrowing of certain scenes from the original books. Overall I liked the effort, but I was actually hoping for a longer piece. Writer shows promise, keep up the writing!
Pyriel CZ chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Interesting. The end surprised me, but it is Fiona, right? So IC :-)