Reviews for gas and one little match
quietlydestroyd chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I know this work is from awhile ago.. but it's lovely to be able to know what's in Polly's head.
AnonymousLily chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Nice use of second person, so readers are forced into her perspective. I think it would be well worth extending. This character was the one who disturbed me the most in the book, even more than the suicide.
Darren's Wings chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Very good... I usually try to leave more detailed reviews, but honestly I don't know what else to say. Well done.
Bliss Potter chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
This was really good. could have been a bit lengthened, but still well written. I enjoyed it.
Reader1 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Decent. True to the book and the character. I'm not a fan of 2nd person perspective, but it works here. The writing style needs a little polish, but not too bad.