Reviews for Modern Warfare
underlings chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
this was lovely! you got everyone's characterizations down perfectly
Donni chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
Love it! Perfect, and really good characterizations to boot!
InfinityRabbit chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
This is totally plausible and these two are my eyeshield OTP. Loved this and hope to see some more great writing :)
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
The best "getting together" fic.
Kushina-san chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
a great one!
puregarnet chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
I love it! They are so in character! Nice!
mollycoddle chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I will reread this again. And again.
Hermi-ko chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Awesome reading, love the story behind the bomb and how Mamori deals with the pattern XD Do you mind if I translate this story into French? Congrats for such an epic fic!
Terikel chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Hah, this is great. Amazing how well you go this two down, escpecially Hiruma. He's so screwed in the head, and Mamori still understands him great. xD
I also like the analogy with the bomb. So true. xD
sleight chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Analogy: great and relatable to Hiruma
Characterization: accurate as Mamori will think
Writing: flow, concise, easy to follow

God this was great sometimes I read it in my free time bc it's so great
rexroy101 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
That was incredibly witty, and brilliant! Perfect metaphors and great character reactions. Though I do feel like Mamori was just a "little" slow o the uptake, but I guess you would never expect a high schooler to deport people...
Ty chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Oh geez. The way you write and the metaphors and the dissection of Hiruma's mind and motivations and Mamori's reactions and just ugh everything. I cant even express in words how great this piece is. Freakin' perfect.
Mei Vir D. Ripper chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This story deserves a standing ovation in every word and description used on how Hiruma and Mamori's actual relationship works. I found myself utterly speechless - reading every step of the way - I felt lightheaded, thrilled, nauseous, all in one. Actually, I don't think I'm having that much sense in my review now. All I know is that, this deserves more than this shitty review and fave, I am about to give you.

I should give you a good old death hug for this awesome fic!


Blaquestarr chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Flawless... One of the best writers I've seen on !
whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Awwww! Such a cute ending! :DDD

This fic was so funny! Very analytical. xD Hiruma is a piece of work isn't he? I MISS READING EYESHIELD 21. Dx

You should write moer of this pairing~ Your take on how the characters act is spot on. ;P
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