Reviews for Beautiful Kingdom
Tuliharja chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
I really liked how you described things in this. I think you captured quite nicely how Hashirama saw Mito and how utterly strong, michevious yet beautiful she is. This was really warm, little one-shot.
CherryArrow chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
beautifully written
hues chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
No matter how many different fics I read with Mito present, I can't seem to find a similar trait among each author's view of hers. This is a good thing because we hardly know anything about her, yet the way you project her as a quiet beauty seems believable. :)
Robin G. Fellow chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Hashirama is such a sap. I like how he still secretly thinks it's fate. That line was cute. The slow progression of their romance was a very nice.
dolcezza chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Just lovely. I like how you incorporated Madara into it.
TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
That was really cool. I liked it. Sometimes I like how there are characters that don't really get fleshed out. It lets you make them into whatever you want without someone goin on about OOCness. This was cute
Kaiser969 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Lovely fic i guess Hashirama was not always the powerful hokage we are told