Reviews for Unwrap
Lost Legendaerie chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Apart from the inherent glee that comes with seeing a straight pairing in the fandom, I was plesantly surprised by this story. You gave Eri a lot of believable depth, complete with flaws and virtures.

Good dialogue, too, although I would have tried to mix it a little better with the two big paragraphs at the begining. Blocks of text can be a pain to read on site; but I'm sure you know that.

So... yes. I'm sure lots of people are happy to spread the Eri love around as well - I don't really care but I'm glad to see her - and I hope you continute to write in the WEWY fandom!