Reviews for The Long Road Home
Animago chapter 2 . 4/16
Isso aqui é muito bom. Melhor do que eu imaginava
Você realmente escreve tão bem os personagens
Animago chapter 1 . 4/16
Eu não entendo. Se a lily se torna uma curandeira para poder curar James, então como ela vai se apaixonar pelo severus? Lily vai ficar com sev enquanto tentar trazer James de volta? Isso é muito confuso. Se ela desistir se trazer James de volta e seguir com a vida, ela não vai ter mais razões de ser curandeiro. A menos que ela comece ser uma curandeiro por outras razões... Mas tudo isso não importa. Se Severus aparecer como um curandeiro formado em 1980 ou 1979 ou 1981 nos próximos capítulos essa fanfic me ganhou.
xxxliesjee chapter 170 . 2/12
Loved it so so much
Pratik chapter 170 . 12/20/2023
*critique xD
Pratik chapter 170 . 12/20/2023
It was a long read. I binged it in 2 days. I soo need to sleep. My only critic is that Dumbledore didnt get enough appreciation. But whatever, cant have your cake, and eat it too. ;)
Thank you for such a wonderful story. Alas! part of the journey is the end.
costella chapter 170 . 11/13/2023
I started reading this years ago and I’m so glad I came back to finish it - brilliant story, thanks for seeing it through!
jdvselman chapter 56 . 10/27/2023
I am enjoying this story. Thank you.
One thing: please review the proper usage of semicolons. They’re to be used infrequently and for a specific, special kind of sentence. They’re being used a bit much here and not grammatically correct. I am impressed at your grammar as a whole. I’ve seen some fanfics where I literally couldn’t get past the first paragraph due to extremely bad grammar, and yours is wonderfully refreshing to read.
I hope this comes across as constructive criticism, and not in a mean way; I do not mean it to be rude. (See the semicolon there? )

A quick tip regarding semicolons: The two sentences on either side of a semicolon must be complete sentences. Semicolons are not to be used in place of commas.
Now, back to your fun story! I find myself thinking about it throughout the day, excited to see what happens next. (The comma above is a comma, not a semicolon. The second sentence is not a complete sentence). Thanks for reading!
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 170 . 8/13/2023
This story was fantastic! One of my favorite fanfics I have read. Well written, I feel like the characters were very much thought out and within the usual character. I really enjoyed that there is no character bashing, one of the things I do not enjoy about many Sevily fics. Everyone in this is just trying to do the best they can in the circumstances that they are in. And even though it is long I never once lost interest. I loved the way you wrote Grace's character, you could just imagine Snape's expression on her little face, and it was funny when she would say something that you knew Snape would have said, like telling Harry "mind your manners". I enjoyed this so much I am sad it is over. I'm sure that I will come back to this story again.
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 145 . 8/12/2023
Yep, this chapter was pretty much exactly how I expected this discovery to go down. Although I kind expected Snape to tell tell Dumbledore something to the effect of "congratulations, I think you just may have convinced me to do that killing curse you want me to do".
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 140 . 8/11/2023
Noooooo! I mean Dumbledore dying is fine, but making Snape do it is too much!
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 137 . 8/11/2023
I'm pretty sure I already said this but I really hope Dumbledore has not asked Snape to murder him. I think in this story the "power that the Dark Lord knows not" is going to actually be Harry's family, specifically Snape. That would be awesome.
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 119 . 8/11/2023
Oh my word, I'm crying. Goodnight Grace.
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 78 . 8/9/2023
I knew it would happen but I'm still crying! It's so sad!
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 76 . 8/9/2023
Oh Harry is going to be grounded for life and detention until he graduates.
Chelsea Greenwell chapter 70 . 8/9/2023
I think they forgot one person who would suspect who the Father is, Dumbledore; although he has plausible deniability. Also I really hope that Snape does not have to kill Dumbledore in this!
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