Reviews for Sunrise
EN chapter 5 . 5/24/2011
Interesting idea, but too many mistakes to read. Spelling errors, grammatically errors and storyline errors. How could Violet age 3 years while Renesme ages 1 year? Three year olds speak in sentences. As a writer myself, just make sure you write about what you know or research well. Good luck.
EBRAJERCECullen 130 chapter 6 . 5/23/2011
loved it! Write more soon!
IHeartEyeCandy chapter 5 . 5/3/2011
Great chapter Val, can't wait to see what happens when the Volturi arrives!
EBRAJERCECullen 130 chapter 5 . 5/1/2011
loved it! Write more soon!
Serina93 chapter 5 . 5/1/2011
Can you please give Nessie some kick ass powers as well.
carolina chapter 4 . 4/30/2011
WTF? I do NOT think being homeless is an excuse to just take Violet

away from her mother! D:,

who knows, maybe the mom was taking a walk and set her down for a little bit!

that just pissed me off -.-
MyFandoms7 chapter 5 . 4/30/2011
More plz
Amy the Best Friend chapter 5 . 4/30/2011
Hi hun! Long time no see. Wonderful chapter! THEY ARE COMING! (Shiiiiiiiiiiit) Keep it coming! Love ya, Doc xx
Irene Moriarty chapter 4 . 4/12/2011
You know exactly how much I enjoyed it as you were sitting next to me as I read it.

Good job, buddy!

Amy xx
MyFandoms7 chapter 4 . 4/11/2011
Loved it CNT wait for the nxt chapter
FiveStarReader chapter 4 . 4/9/2011
WELL FOR STARTERS I LOVE THIS STORY! IT IS SO AWESOME! VIOLET IS GONNA BD BEAUTIFUL! SO EXCITED FOR EM AND ROSE!
AllisonteamEmmett chapter 4 . 4/9/2011
AMAZING! Update soon please! :D
Jojo1981 chapter 4 . 4/9/2011
Aw I feel bad for Rose :( Not everyone is as nice as her and poor Violet are they ever going to tell her about her real mother?

Great chapter, you have to update soon
EBRAJERCECullen 130 chapter 4 . 4/9/2011
loved it! Write more soon!
MyFandoms7 chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
Love it write more plz
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