Reviews for Lilium Inter Spinas
lemondrizzlecake chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
I liked this! I normally avoid AUs with Ryan's younger sisters, but I feel you handled the trope well and avoided falling into cliches. Very well done! I'd love to read more :)
I found it interesting how you placed the story at the present day. As someone who watched the show during its first run in 2003, to me the O.C. is forever tied to that time period, the early 2000 fashion and the flip phones and everything. So it was a bit jarring to read about Trump, and the Kardashians, and the likes. But good job with keeping it all together!
sonotalady chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
You write fabulous OCs. If you ever feel like it, I'd love more of this!
AFAN chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
I didn't think I could love this story anymore than I did but you've proved me so horribly wrong! I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
I'm glad you revised the story because it's better than ever.
Emily989 chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
This is Emily! Why don't you change the dog's name to Pippa? What do you think of that?
Rose Scott chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
You could keep rewriting since I miss the OC and hardly anyone updates anymore. I loved every iteration of this story, and I hope you keep writing.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/24/2016
This is amazing please continue with it :)
Emily989 chapter 14 . 4/16/2015
This is still the same Emily. Are you going to update this story soon? Maybe have Lilly have an anxiety attack, and Ryan is the only one to cal her down. Dawn shows up for Casino Night, and it's the same as before. Except Lilly & Summer make peace, and Ryan meets Kaitlin Cooper and Taylor Townsend. Lilly wins the raffle purse, and everything blows up as before with Lilly & Garrett talking on the beach. That's where you left off before. What do you think so far?
Emily chapter 14 . 1/19/2014
When are you ever going to update? I still think that Lilly should make it harder on Ryan for her forgiveness, but not too much more. When will Taylor come into the story? What about the Cotillion chapter and maybe even have Ryan dance with Kaitlin? What do you think about that?
lisistrataantigona chapter 14 . 12/7/2013
I just found this fic it's great! I hope that you return to it sometime, really well written congrats!
Emily chapter 14 . 10/5/2013
I guess the next chapter will be all about The Gamble. You could call it Forgive & Forget. Ryan keeps trying to get back into Lilly's good graces at the same time Dawn shows up like last time. Remember about Kaitlin having a crush on Ryan? Well, this is where they can meet. Then, with Lilly winning a special prize and deal with Dawn's drama like last time. Garrett has his talk with Lilly, and when Dawn leaves. Lilly finally forgives Ryan for leaving. Because unlike Dawn he came back to stay. Then the next chapter will be about one of my favorite episodes The Debut, and you can call it Women In White, and this would be a good point to introduce Taylor into the story. For the dates Marissa goes with Luke, Ryan & Taylor go together and so do Seth & Summer, and Lilly & Garrett go together. Ryan dances with Kaitlin at the Cotillion before everything blows up. What do you think of all that? Please update soon.
Penelope L chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Welp, i definitely misread the year on "published," this seems to be a work in progress. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. *begs*
Penelope L chapter 14 . 5/8/2013
Update this soon! Please? I've just read this all in one sitting and I'm afraid that if you don't continue I could totally go Kathy Bates on your ass. Like in 'Misery'? I'm joking, but seriously, I am addicted to this. Picturing a young Tate Donovan as Garrett...mmm...and I have always liked that man's voice. I just love Lily's character! I'm so interested in the dynamic between her and the Cohen family, I really like the bonding between Lily and Kirsten. I thought what you said in your author's note about making Lily like Kirsten's mother to have her appeal to Caleb was ingenius. But like, on the real, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! PM me if you're stuck, but didn't you crank this out in like a week? If you can average two chapters a day with material this amazing, you just might be my favorite person. Much love, Pen.
Everythingistaken chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Love the idea and the way you're writing! Looking forward to the next few chapters :)
Dbunny chapter 14 . 3/26/2013
UPDATE! No seriously update SOON! I started reading this around 9:00 pm yesterday and I've not stopped since! It's addictive and wonderful and PLEASE UPDATE SOON !
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