Reviews for Inadequacy
punainentaivas chapter 7 . 8/7/2016
You write so well!
11lol11 chapter 7 . 7/11/2016
Great work! Keep it up, I'm loving it!
R.E. Weissrose chapter 7 . 4/3/2016
Just wanna say, I REALLY miss your stories... Even when I'm not that active reading in the FMA fandom anymore ;_;
LoraLogue chapter 7 . 1/24/2012
Please write more! I need to find out what happens when they meet up!
FMAlover555 i really like that chapter 7 . 1/20/2012
Is there going to be more? I really hope there is...'cause if not... i'll be kinda sad... so... More please? *puppy dog look*
ahbuggrit chapter 7 . 12/13/2011
Really good story... I love how you've constructed the relationship of Roy and Riza. I particularly enjoyed the fact that you didn't have them jumping all over one another straight away.

Please update soon.
Anonymous chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
I'd love to see an update!
Shirly chapter 7 . 9/10/2011
Wow, I flew through this and I was upset to see that its only up to Chapter . update soon, please! You are my favorite fan fic writer on this website!
hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 7 . 8/4/2011

Damn Bradley for the whole damn "war" if you could call it that.
UniversalBunny chapter 7 . 8/3/2011
Amazing! Continue!
LongliveA.Monk chapter 7 . 8/1/2011
I love the use of foreshadowing in this chapter. Great job!
rinxxxav chapter 7 . 7/30/2011
Great as always! Thanks for updating :D
makoshark chapter 7 . 7/29/2011
I'm really enjoying this story. I'm glad you updated. I like the way you have done Riza's and Havoc's friendship.
Cerisabeth chapter 7 . 7/29/2011
Great story! C: Just don't like that Havoc's a sniper :/ Keep going! :3
LongliveA.Monk chapter 6 . 7/22/2011
It's really interesting to read your interpretations of how the characters all first met each other. And very well executed.
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