|Reviews for White in the Night|
| Reishin Amara chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
lol,u should have them hide in the house under the bridge...then they falls asleep on a wide bed...jack wakes up a bit later and finds two hot women in bed with him and goes WTF lol
| Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I think it's pretty good. Though for waiting depends on what you mean by this year.
| Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Nice description, nice battle, and I like the friendship between the two.
| KillaDemonRocker chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
daaaaaamn, that was awesome!
Lily got that sweet new outfit and she has a hidden gun too?
she wears white, all the assassins from assassin's creed wears white. it's like 22. it just makes sense.
| Lone Effortz chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
You've finally put it up! And uploaded it on the first day of the new year! What a pleasant surprise!
A few errors here and there, but I'm proud of you! You're finally back in business.
I hope to see the fully fleshed out story soon.
And Leona, the shy blond girl with glasses swearing and doing something completely out of character? That's just crazy! Not to mention that she's working alongside Lily, an assassin!
I expect great things from this story, man.