Reviews for Pecha Berry
Farla chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I got as far as the wall of text listing characters, the realization you were using Japanese pokemon names, and the Japanese "honorifics", ie, actual words for family members that we already have in English, you decided your fanfic desperately needed, and realized that no, I don't need to wade through the fangirl Japanese of your actual story too.
Turnex chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Got some good potential here.

However, i've noticed that some of the japanese written in english is incorrect or does not sound like the japanese pronunciation when read.

eg. you wrote Ohayou but Ohaiyo sounds more like the japanese pronunciation.

But keep up the good work, I'm keen to see which pokemon(s) Hikari adopts. :D