Woah. ...Dark. Technically if Czes is adopted as Ennis's family then he and Firo are...in-laws...your fic just made me realize this. You also made me realize that Czes is chronologically the adult here. What a strange family they make! Poor Czes. :(

Well written!

Amazing one-shot! The narration was wonderful, especially the back and fort from the domestic kitchen scene to the torture Czes experienced.

Ack! That was great, and I love the very end!

I read this and Mother child, both these fics are so nicely written and I really love how you got Czeslaw's character down so well! I really hope you write more with him because there isn't enough love for the little guy or many that might know how to write him well. He is my favortie Baccano character and it makes my heart ache that these two stories were one shots. Please write more with him! Thank you for being awesome.

Jesus wow, you! Niiiiice. Hart'd it pretty bad :D :D :D Czelaw's trauma is so well depicted. Heart-wrenching in such a good way because I know that...um, he's got a daddy now? O/o Haha. Yes, that.

You write him so good! ._. I loved it!

Really awesome interpretation of how those two relate. I really like it.

;_; !

And this is why Fermet is my least favourite character. Actually, he shouldn't even be considered a favourite anything, he's just terrible. Though hard to admit, the references to what Czes has gone through was gorgeously done... though very painful to read.

Very short but nice and dark. Great job!

Hi

Just passing to say that I love this fic too

Really, you describe Czes in a very good way, I want more fics of him ok? ;D

Bye