Jess' kindness at the end is great... there's a perfect thaw here. Not too much too fast.

great writing! Jess' fear of it never happening again was so well expressed. Hot kisses. Can't wait for more.

Nice! I love the list of what he doesn't want to like about her. I love the undo button.

Great poem. Great chapter.

Great chapter!

Still great!

Ok so here is the best compliment I can offer. It has been nearly a decade since I saw season 3 and your writing is so freaking bang on that I feel like you must be re-writing what actually happened! You aren't, are you? Either way, I'm loving it.

Your writing is brilliant. The insight into Jess' thinking is bang on. I love it.

this is an awesome story and I love how you worked Jess's writing into it.

I love this story so much! Your characterization is amazing, really, and Jess and Rory's relationship is so well done and I don't even know the word for it - (like Jess can never describe Rory's beauty) it's subtle and warm, a beautiful slow burn of a love story. Lovely writing.

I know you stopped writing this years ago but it would be so cool if you could continue. Your characterisations and dialogues are so spot on :)

AHHHHHHHHHHH, you have to continue this fic, it is one of the best literati stories out there.

I hope you update!

Your descriptions are bang-on and your writing is addictive. The towel scene had a different spin from kimlockt's and it was a delight to read. I hope you have time to update this story. I would love to know what happens with the book and, oh yeah, their first time. Thanks!

This story is so so good! You are very talented and your style... I love it! I hope everything is fine with you and you will post a new chapter soon :)