Reviews for Wedding day, Myself Yourself
mukirome chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Cute fic. Only thing is that you need to start a new paragraph every time there is a new speaker.
Do I need to login chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Sweet. The ending could be longer and more detailed etc. But really nice .
NO-Longer-On-HERE1 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Hmmm that story was good dont take this the wrong way but the ending was i suggest u write about Youta and Hinako its seemed like their story had great potentail. please check out my story and review it please and thanks
apostalin king chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
shit
Reiji Ishiya chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Hi. Don't normally do this kind of thing, but I guess I could try.

First of all, great job on the story. The concept and plot are pretty good, not to mention you're the first to do something like this in this category. (Kudos, to you, by the way.)

Also, there were slight mistakes in punctuation, (like run-on sentences or a missing comma) but they can be fixed.

All in all, good job, especially for your first story. Keep it up! D

- Reiji