Reviews for The Serpens Order
EmmaB chapter 8 . 4/3
Sweetie, once I got past all the spelling mistakes, it was a great story. But seriously, spellcheck is the eighth wonder of the world, I assure you

Kisses always

EmmaB
M. Jackson Potter chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
Is English your first language?
SwiftlyandSoftly chapter 41 . 9/12/2013
I love this story. The deal with the Elder wand is that it is originally buried with Dumbledore but then Voldermort gets it, followed by Harry who snaps it and throws it off a cliff after the battle of Hogwarts at the end of DH. The writings really good and the ideas are incredible. I'm still slightly confused as to why Alexis won't act upon her feelings for James even though she knows he's in love with her. Seems odd to me and I don't get her reasoning. Keep writing, you're ace x
EmmaB chapter 53 . 6/29/2013
YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS STORY WITH MAX.

NO BUTS.

YOU WILL.

XXXX
MG.rsb chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
red not read
angelrocks chapter 49 . 5/11/2013
I LUVED THE SOTRY! IT WAS LIKE EVERYTHING I HOPED FOR AND REALLLYY FUNNY! U SHUD REALLYL BECUM AN AUTHOR!
Gryffie chapter 27 . 1/7/2013
Fred and Megan end up together don't they?(:
dawnnight chapter 53 . 1/3/2013
Hey, this is an awesome story. I am very happy you did this story.I hope you will make more james s. Love stories.

-Love,

- dawnnight -
FoxFace54 chapter 53 . 12/31/2012
Read the whole thing and loved it, only thing I have to say is: I liked Fred better than James I liked him better with Alexis as well
Something.I.Need chapter 54 . 12/25/2012
Thank you so much for writing this story, it was so entertaining to read and I kept getting in trouble for spending to much time on the computer. The only part i didn't like was how Alexis was so stubben with her and James' relationship. other then that the story was AMAZING! Thank you again for writing it. :)
PoisonIvyLeague chapter 43 . 11/27/2012
Are the Marauders going to come back into the story? I think it'll be interesting/funny to see how Alexis deals with everyone together :) especially after Remus and James(current, not Marauder). I really love the Marauders and Alexis x
Mlle-Lay chapter 7 . 11/5/2012
I really wish she would let the boys know or at least Scorpuis and Ash...
Mlle-Lay chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
Really good story so far

love the idea of the Malfoy twins (and I have to say I really like the name Alexis :) )
looking forward to know what's going on, is Voldemort back or something ?
A united Potter/Malfoy family would be a first

And I figure someone already pointed this out and you just didn't want to change it cause' it's bothersome, but Fleur's daughter's name is actually Victoire not Victorie (meaning Victory in french )
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Did you know that this story is longer than all the actual books except order of the Phoenix. I'm impressed
Claudia chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
hiii :) I know it's been a loong time since you end this fanfiction but I just wanna say that I really looved it, I don't remember if I already left a review but I read it when it was about 10 chapters away from the end...and I'm here again to ask you if I can re-post your fanfiction in another page and in spanish :) I'm going to give you credits of course, you are an amazing writter :) xx
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