|Reviews for Rest for the Wicked|
| MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 17 . 7/11
what the flip flap paddy wack?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US!?
*starts listing edits to distract from the pain*
~ so, you randomly switched character names for that guy in the past few chapters (Petre-Isaiah-Nathan)
~ you started using modern terms that made no sense (Count Chocula, Crispy Critter, etc)
~ you started getting a little ragged in your writing during the last few chapters. I'm assuming it was due to "wanting to be done with it" syndrome, and that makes sense.
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?! it's very good, two thumbs up :D
| MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 16 . 7/11
there's a book? what is this sorcery?
| MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 15 . 7/11
who the heck is Isaiah?
| MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 10 . 7/11
You know, somehow I saw that coming. As soon as I wrote the comment for that previous chapter, I just knew she was going to be Marishka.
*contemplates the switch*
meh. I liked Marishka as one of the original brides. Sarina was a pretty name, would have fit this girl. but I dearly like Mari as a name, it just sounds right somehow. ah well.
| MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 2 . 7/11
Marishka, the blonde Bride
Verona, the raven-haired Bride
Aleera, the redheaded Bride
Who is Sorina?
by the by, I adore this story. Mari is awesome, right from the start, and I really really REALLY hope you change the ending cause that's the one thing I absolutely DESPISED about the movie. guess I'll see when I get there.
| hateme101 chapter 18 . 4/27/2014
Such a dark ending
| Marzipan chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Nice idea but her language is very off putting to me because people didn't talk like that in the time period. I'm saying writing old english, but they didn't say awesome and women could be independant but it was extremely unusual for women to be so sarcastic. Great start!
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
No offense to your story plot and all...but I recall during the time of Van Helsing fiction novels (like Lord of the Rings), ships run on coal/steam and airplanes were not invented back then. Good plot though :)
| darkcazzievirvues chapter 19 . 11/25/2012
I'm abit confused with this part but I Get It so Keep Going on with your Other Van Helsing Story
| The Clock Strikes Thirteen chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Is this a modern telling of Van Helsing? Because I highly doubt that air planes, Titanic or Lord of the Rings was invented back then...
| ChaosOfAButterfly chapter 17 . 6/29/2012
It's really good do far! I want Mari to be with Carl.. :)
Please update soon!
| Apphia chapter 17 . 4/7/2012
Okay, I really think Carl needs a girl:) Plus correct me if i'm wrong but isn't the other guy the son of the guy she used to like? I would think that would be kind of weird to like your old lovers son. UPDATE!
| Victoria chapter 15 . 3/12/2012
Really good! you spelled Dewergi wrong
| JaquesRiddle chapter 12 . 2/19/2012
Hey, I've been reading this story on my phone today and I think its really good, I would have reviwed on my phone but it took agees, so I thought I would just review on this last chapter coos I didnt want to be annoying, but yeah. Reallllllllyyyyy like this story please continue to update:)
| SpeedDemon315 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
I have quick question and concern regarding the first two sentences of chapter one. I noticed you used one of the phrases I offered for my Van Helsing challenge. Now, are you participating in the contest or did you just want to use that line?