Reviews for Ties that Bind
Esmereilda chapter 5 . 9/16
but I like this version tho T_T
Esmereilda chapter 4 . 9/16
lol this gives new meaning to hell hath no fury...
Esmereilda chapter 3 . 9/16
both of them are going to freak out
Esmereilda chapter 2 . 9/16
lol ofc draken is the cause of all of this XD
Esmereilda chapter 1 . 9/16
poor kim but at least she ended up with naruto rather than sasuke
a-d Pilot chapter 5 . 9/13
This is way too long and disorganized. But it took around an hour so... Here you go.


Topics for the story, since you claimed to be losing interest.

This is taking too long.
Main points.
Kim is a treasure trove of tech. Danzo and Konoha want it.
Kim is linked to an entire society who have tech/soldiers/resources/land/? Danzo and Konoha desire, and want to keep secret from everyone else. Like guns. Or telephones.
Kim is proof of a society who can attack them without repercussions. Portal a nuke in.

Kim may have impressed them with her abilities and convinced them she has a 'bloodline'ish thing.
Harvest her eggs and use surrogate mothers.
Lock her in a cell and use in vitro fertilization of the preferred clan bloodlines. Namikaze/Uzumaki, Uchiha, and ?
Harvest half her eggs and let her go back to gain favor with her government.

The forced marriage between her and Naruto.
The two refuse.
Council threatens.
They put up an act while trying to research a way home.

Potential Danzo/Root acts.
Harvest Kim's eggs, Naruto's sperm and in vitro's Kim.
Convince council to threaten Kim with death/prison/imprisoned baby farming with in vitro fertilization of various/specificly desired bloodlines.

Purpose: Pushes the two together.
If they come to love each other, the in vitro isn't noticed. If they don't her psych profile claims she won't abort, he will try to convince her not to abort, and the two become a semi-political marriage between the two universes.
Risk of breaking Naruto from Konoha though.

Good grief this is long.

Kim training in chakra.
She almost certainly learns fast.

If training with team Kakashi:
She may impress Sakura and convince her to grow up/mature/emulate/fix the complaints people seem to have with her.
Her actions might do the same to Naruto.
If Kim learns fast enough Sasuke might equate her to Itachi.

If the environment is bad enough he might watch Kim go from friendly, trusting, helpful, to anti-social, secretive, and actively sabotaging others. Giving Sasuke a thought provoking example of what may have happened to Itachi.

Kim's knowledge and tech. By herself.
It might be enough to start a war between the hidden villages.
It might be enough to threaten the status quo where chakra and ninja's rule.
Which knowledge or tech might change the world?
If she studied history and wanted revenge, what knowledge or tech would shatter the hidden villages?

One more thing. Kim and Naruto are heroes and heroines.
Heh. Naruto can even be both!
Let them act the part.

Wade contacts Kim to let her know her government is on the way

I've only a vague knowledge of her series...heck, what I know of Naruto's series is only somewhat better, but if she is a heroine, let her be one.
She's stuck there? Have her work to get out.

If Naruto's a hero, let him act similarly, helping her as he can.

Why does Danzo want her to marry Naruto and not Sasuke?
I've heard he strongly dislikes the Uchiha. True? Dunno.

But if you assume it's her genetics he wants instead...
Possible reasons.
She may come from a family who's children hereditarily gain:
High end intelligence
Extreme physical ability
Innate understanding of combat

In other words, a bloodline of Itachi's.
Not one in a hundred, but one in five. Or better.

How would he know?
Found out during her interrogation when she was spilling her guts to help them get her home.
mangetsu kunoici chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
please...more...PLEASE this story is awesome
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
Cool story continue please.
Siggimondo chapter 5 . 7/14/2014
I appreciate that you left the chapter up, time to go look at some challengers.
Siggimondo chapter 4 . 7/14/2014
I have obviously not noticed the wait time, and the only question I have an opinion is number three: continue with the current pace.
Siggimondo chapter 3 . 7/14/2014
I like this. It tastes like awesome. Time to swallow (read: follow and favourite).
Siggimondo chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
I bit. I chewed. So far I'm enjoying the taste.
Siggimondo chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
My reaction to this chapter can be summed up in three words (four if you want to get technical):
Okay, I'll bite.
KnighteWolfe chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Interesting story premise. I'll with hold my remarks until I've read further along. Although you do need to find a way to separate the scenes in your story. Page Breaks work quite well.

Jmw chapter 5 . 4/23/2014
Can you update Ninja in a galaxy far far away next Please. Also intresting idea for a challenge.
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