Reviews for Retribution
tainted-tash chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Beautiful little story.
InkedBaby chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
The beginning of this reminds me a lot of one of my own stories, mines way more angsty and drawn out though. Lol. I love this, its so sweet, and i just love Dracos viewpoint on things. Amazing job.
Lori94 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
AWWW! FLUFFY! I love the fluff!
harrytwifan chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
**sigh** What a beautiful story! So realistic. I like that I didn't know what Harry was thinking the whole time. There are stories that take thousands of words and countless chapters to say what you said here. It didn't feel rushed at all-just perfect.
Nancy
Carling chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Very tender and sweet. Well done. (Sorry that it sounds like I'm critiquing a steak!)
Yinzer Reader chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Lovely. Thank you.
sapphirescribe chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
I don't have any more words to describe your work. This was another completely beautiful piece. I just loved it.
sessahhh chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
I needed something like this - short, angsty but with a glimmer of hope. And the twoboysmakingout were a nice addition. Very interesting premise. Great job.
Tajala chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I loved it! The way Harry helped/saved Draco was very nice and then both where afraid of what the future might bring... it was so sweet. Beautifully written.

~Tajala
ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Such a sweet and hopeful ending to come out of such a painful beginning. That was lovely, bb. Thank you.

xo
My name is Seren Dipity chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Venis!

This was perfect. The anguish, the longing, the guilt, the silence, the secret. The annoyance of Draco towards the overly adored hero and somehow enemy. I love how you expressed Draco disdain for Harry's image and at the same time showed his profound love for the silent and caring man.

How they have so much in common in all this drama, even though they were in ennemie' camps.

I truly and dearly enjoyed it.

Thank you for sharing it!

Seren
sweetandsaltyff chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Ahhh, this was so very lovely and poignant, infused with deep feeling and understanding of what both boys must have felt after the war was over. I loved it! Thank you for writing and sharing! Muah!
VAVikingGirl chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Awwwww, that is so sweet. What a lovely little o/s showing Harry and Draco coming together so gently.
Hev99 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Oh wow this was so agonisingly beautiful! I'm so glad I saw your banner on Twitter or I might never have read this.

I loved the idea of those two souls, both a little bit broken and hurting inside, being drawn to the same place. A place of such huge significance for both of them, and finding understanding, and ultimately, love, with the other there.

Do you plan to keep this as a one shot? Or are you going to expand it? I'd love to read more, I may have to check out more HP fics!

Thank you for writing and sharing, this was beautiful! xxx
vampireisthenewblack chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
OMFG, is this just a one shot? I want more, dammit!

What a lovely little story. And don't worry about the length, I reckon.
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