Reviews for Symbiosis
AcrossTheThames chapter 5 . 1/10/2011
Excellent!

I'm going to miss this...would quite like to see the actual relationship, but i appreciate the point of the story, and i think it's exceptional; well done :).

Hope to read more of your stories in the near future,

and

cheers, this one made me warm inside :D.
lightning strikes 101 chapter 5 . 1/10/2011
um, excuuuuuuuuuuse me - what on earth do you mean "complete"?

?

you cannot possibly mean the end now can you?

NADAGIO: of course not! don't be ridiculous! i just clicked that by accident - but im already beginning the next chapter!

SERIANA14: oh good, you had me frightened there!

no, seriously, UPDATE!

btw, LOVED LOVED LOVED the ending - like ginny's pov on them - marvelous! and hahahahahaha, especially liked their little "experiments"! hahahahahahahahaha! :D :D :D :D

LOVED IT!

update soon!

~mE~
notwritten chapter 4 . 1/10/2011
Very interesting. Keep smiling. :-)
sweet-tang-honney chapter 4 . 1/9/2011
awesome chapter update soon:D
refya chapter 4 . 1/9/2011
Great to see Severus get a job he likes better than virtually running a chippy, even if it does mean being in Harry's debt. Also good to see him register that Harry is not his father and has grown up. ...and have fun indeed... I wonder what Hermione and Severus will get up to on their own.
refya chapter 3 . 1/9/2011
Lovely way to show their friendship growing, and to see Hermione's feelings changing. Also interesting to see that Severus does agree that house-elves should be treated better, and that Muggle money can't be copied by magic - which makes sense as the Goblins exchange it.
lightning strikes 101 chapter 4 . 1/9/2011
you bloody wanker! how could you do that to me? how can you possibly leave it there? seriously, i had the biggest grin on my face, expecting the awesomest thing ever and instead i get the end of the bloody chapter!

hmph!

UPDATE SOON! (and i want some more experiments happening if you get what i mean!)

:P :P :P

update!

~mE~ (ps. sorry about the wanker comment - for the past month or so ive just been repeating it to everyone like a parrot - dont know why - guess it's cos it sounds funny) :P
goblinphantomgirl chapter 4 . 1/9/2011
Wow, your chapters just keep getting better and better. I congratulate you on your speeding writing and keeping them in character once again, and await your next chapter in eager anticipation. Till then, :) God Bless xx
azulkan2 chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, RL bites some times. I love this story. Looking forward to the next part.
Paisley Snail chapter 2 . 1/7/2011
Enjoying this, so far! I like the dynamic you've set up between Hermione and Severus - a bit tense, but more or less civil.

I look forward to seeing how this story develops. :)
lightning strikes 101 chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
that was BRILLIANT! BRILLIANT BRILLIANT BRILLIANT BRILLIANT!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! and :P LOOOOOOOOOVED that second last scene! :P :P :P

i have rarely come across a story that's so wonderful in everything! the timing, the cuteness, the awesomeness of it, the brilliance of it, the superbness of the writing and *sigh* note of warning though - you ever stop writing this and i will come stalk you and dunk you into a cauldron filled with skrewts until you agree to continue this! :D :D :D :D no pressure! :D

and have i mentioned how wonderful this is?

update soon! :D :D :D

~mE~
notwritten chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
This reading is good. Keep smiling. :-)
goblinphantomgirl chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
I didn't think this chapter seemed rushed. I liked the way you set it out. The brief moments demonstrate the passing of time and the significant little progressions. You have an excellent vocabulary as well. I look forward to the next chapter, Well done :) God Bless xx
sweet-tang-honney chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
loved it great story update soon:D
notwritten chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
Enjoyable and likeable. Keep smiling. :-)
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