wriite mor please!

whoa darkpossesiveIan sad story yet still well done

I like this one-shot.

I think I like this version better but both are great. This one seems darker, edgier, and I really like it. I can't wait for more on both.

First, thank you. You having not seen the last two episodes makes me feel better about not seeing them yet ether. Also, thanks for not spoiling them in your fictions. I was very worried about that.

Oh, God! You scared meh! I thought Ian had been killed...perhaps he has. He doesn't seem himself...but then he did at the end, just a bit...

Oooo, this was interesting...You see, I was determining between writing a story of something of this nature and another about...something I shall not tell you for my own safty...what do you think?

Oh, and it's 2:19 and I still got one to go! Anywhoo, loved it. Can't wait to read more. Very interested, especially with the whole Suki hating him and CJ ignoring him...why? Hehe.

Please continue.