|Reviews for Athena's Daughter|
| thewonderingman chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Not bad, not bad at all, its actouly pretty good if you think about it.
Now I just have a few things I thought you might wanna know.
fist off, Just to let you know percy jackson and the olympians involves greak mythology so doing a crossover is unecissary, and I think if you switch to just one, you'll get more views.
And when using these ,,,,, your supposed to put a spce between it and the next word.
Other than that the story was pretty good a little short but nontheless good, and I hope you update relatively soon.
wonderingman out, peace. ;P
| wintermoon13 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
WELL I DON'T KNOW ABOUT YOU MY DEAR ELIZABETH BUT I OFTEN FEEL LIKE A PLASTIC BAG DRIFTING THROUGH THE WIND. OOOOOH YEAH. :D XD
But anyways, yes, it is I, me, here, reading your story.
This is super funny. XDDD I really like that part of it. I just have two things to pick on right now, since I'm such a good friend. XD (JK)
1. Remember to put spaces in between your sentences, you silly goose!
&2. Try to finish your sentences, please. I've found that in your writing you usually start a sentence and then immediately switch to saying something else entirely. So please try to work on that..._
AND YEP THAT'S ALL.
See ya on Tuesday! (if we have school!)