Oh, come on! That is NOT a proper ending. *pout* Can't we at least see Quinn finally have her turn? And maybe just a hint of what the one month as 'best friends' in school would be like? I know you said possible sequel, but I'm telling you, NOT FAIR. I think you have one more chapter in you to wrap this up a little neater, but still leave it open ended enough.

...Please?

! I loved it! Better than how I expected it to end. I would love to read a epilogue or sequel, but I am pretty satisfied here too. Great job!

that was definetely a great story to read! i loved it but knowing that you maybe have a sequel to this story it's killing me.. Whenever you are ready though i will make sure to read it.. love your stories and your writing..

Awesome. Brilliant. Argh, this is a time when words truly miss. Basically I love you and if you were here I would propose and keep you so you can write stories forever. Hell I would work for you so that you can write without any other considerations! :P

Ok stalker-ish declarations aside, thank you so darn much for your hypnotic addictive stories :) All with awesomely happyish Faberry endings :D

Looks sad at the thought of only one chapter left.

And ok, maybe not waiting any longer. Slow, loving, caring, thoughtful. Everything Rachel wanted from her fairytale.

I like the simple conversational interactions between them, they still show their feelings subtley, but still there.

I’m not sure what I think about Rachel’s offer to continue hiding in school, I can see why she’s done it, but can’t help thinking that it kind of undermines Quinn’s decision and actions that got them into this situation. Rachel still seems to want to know what is more important to Quinn, her or popularity. They’ve both done one of the hardest thing and told their parents, now they have to figure out when the right time to tell the rest of the world is. I’d almost be interested to see Santana appear after school is over, to find out what the fuck is going on, as surely she would want to know why Quinn flipped out on her. And basically how to avoid it happening again, without the risk of losing more status in school. Is remaining friends in the public/school eye, but lovers out of it not going to be stressful as well, they will slip up at some point. Hmmm. Again, both options have pluses and minuses to them. Grrr. )

You’ve left me happy again at the end of this, slightly confused but happy.

‘She once again had no control over anything, living her biggest fear every second.’ ( It’s good that Quinn and Judy to talk about things, they both need too. And starting to work on their relationship too.

Yay, you let Rachel come visit and spend the day. I’m glad Rachel stopped hiding her feelings, and told Quinn she felt the same too. That’s not a small thing Rachel has decided to do, whilst she has been loud (as always) in acknowledging both sexes want sex, not just guys, she’s also always been proud (mostly) of her choice to wait for the right person. After Quinn making her choice in regrettable circumstances, I think it’s something she’ll be honoured (for want of a better word) to be given. Eventually. On a side note, fairytales, that’s what started me reading fanfictions, wanting to prove to myself they could happen in real life (yes I’m aware they aren’t real life, but they still give me some hope). I like Rachel’s summation of her feelings, and how her relationship with Quinn has differed from her previous ones and what makes it move forward. Romance in reality. I’m glad they are at least waiting until the time is a bit more right, not just because no one else is around. Least you didn’t leave me sad at the end of this chapter.

Gradually dawning just what they’ve done, and how out of character for them they have acted. Now to tell Judy, I like her rambling though, as she tries to work out what possessed Quinn to hit Santana and leave cheerios. “because Rachel and I are dating.” Well, that’s one way to do it. I’m still undecided as to the best (for everyone concerned) way to tell parents. I really want to hug Quinn now though, she doesn’t need her mum to immediately start questioning her, she’ll (and Rachel will) have enough of that in school. If Judy can not support her daughter straight away, then giving her a few minutes to sort her thoughts out (how long has Quinn had to do this, compared to how long Judy has had) should stop her acting as impulsively. Is she used to dealing with Quinn even, as wasn’t it her father that threw her out upon announcing the pregnancy. But, back to Quinn and Rachel, ‘You’re not a phase’, is she trying to reassure, not Rachel, but herself and her confidence in her feelings. (What’s going to happen if/when Russell finds out?)

It might not be the best position for Judy to find them in, but it might show her that Quinn is serious about this. I’m glad Judy is going to stand by her daughter again though, support from your own family is needed just as much as support from your girlfriend and her family. I like Rachel’s suggestion of a joint meal, with all 3 important parents around. Give Judy some support too, that she’s not the only one going through this, the Berry’s will be more accustomed (sadly) to the homophobia that the girls are likely to face, it’ll be a whole new world for Judy, she’s used to being on the other side of the fence, judging, not being judged. Sorry, have you guessed I like trying to figure out people’s motives and feelings, even if I’m not good at it at times.

Yay, the Berry men and Judy get along , and Rachel pulling Quinn along on a diva storm out is just an amusing mental image! It must be nice for both of them to be free to interact with each other and to just generally touch, whilst Rachel strikes me as someone who enjoys contact with other people she’s never really had the people around her to enjoy it with, and Quinn just has always been reserved and uncomfortable with interactions, hiding things, and her parents who I don’t see as being particularly touchy people. Wow, that was an unexpected admission, Quinn thinks she loves Rachel, and Rachel has returned it. She’s still afraid, hiding things. ( Did you have to make them sad at the end of the chapter?

:)

Just want say to you did a beautiful job on this story you stayed to what you wanted it to be and I must say I enjoyed it from the beginning to almost end :). Can't wait for your other story I love reading your stories...

This was brilliant! I think Rachel needs to return the favor in the next chapter! LOL! Can't wait to read it (even if it is the last one)! You should write a sequel where they are dealing with things together in the future!

That was a totally cute chapter. I'm glad you didn't do the whole cliche'd thing, 'cos in reality that's not how it is usually. I liked the whole build up instead of rushing into it, keeping us on our toes, a very clever way to keep it fresh and keep us interested.

Also, I hope you feel better soon. Remember; water and bedrest is the best medicine. (:

...I think. xD

...or laughter. idk. just get well soon. :P

xxx

if you're going to end this soon just please, let it be a happy ending. thank you

This was too sweet :) The way you wrote Rachel's first time was how a first time should be or rather is in some cases. Some stories that you read just jump straight into the sex scenes and they're often very unrealistic which I feel loses the stories appeal. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens at school in the last chapter :)

This was sweet! I'm glad Quinn was able to make her first time perfect for her. I only wish it could have been more...reciprocal. I feel like it would have been more powerful for the both of them if they had both been able to experience it more fully with each other. :/

beautiful sweet can't ignore her at school,plus next is the last chapter so it have to end good :P