Reviews for The Mercenary
chromeknickers chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Nice emulation here. It's very stark, dark and gritty, like Jayne, so I can say that I like this quite a lot. :)
da chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
While not a usual lover of poetry ( fewwriters seem to appeal to me) I thought that this waswonderful. Thanks DA
NaniErin chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I've never read The Cinnamon Peeler, but I like the lilting pattern of this poem - it's almost like stream of consciousness, halting and half formed in some places. It feels intimate, like we're peering in on his thoughts.

I like it.
MissGuenever chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Oooh; I like it! Good job, keep up the awesome work!
goddessofbirth chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Ohhh...very sexy IMO. Must be off to read the original now.
Ali chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Lovely, lovely, lovely!
Gotham Siren chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
This was very nice!

I would *love* to read more poems from our favorite couple:)

Looking forward to more of your stories!

DTS Guru chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
That was truly beautiful. I'm very picky about my poetry but now I have to go and look up the original...after work because I'm going to be late if I don't put my laptop down now and get my ass off my couch. I particularly liked the first four lines. There was no way I couldn't finish it after reading those.