Reviews for Mitsune's Wish
Lord-Chrono chapter 12 . 3/4/2017
I simply love the story, everybody should read this!
Guest chapter 12 . 10/30/2015
That was adorable. Prose was shaky, but the story was good.

Got a little horrific at the end when you took the wishing well to its logical extension of an infinitely recursive timesplitting machine.
Yobikir chapter 12 . 6/1/2015
okay, first i wanted to skip this story (36k words and finished?), but then i started to read it and i have to say i greatly enjoyed it.
The spin on a Timetravel-fic you did(and which resulted in a great "in want for a nail"-fic) is interesting and the pure Slight of Live feeling of this fic is rare, nicely done and greatly appreciated by me. Granted the finish seems a little bit rushed, but it is still better then jumping the shark or leaving it unfinished.
i read in your profile about a possible sequel and hope it will happen.
Asomatous chapter 12 . 10/6/2014
really you pulled the everyone gets a turn:-)
GaredBattlespike chapter 12 . 9/5/2014
I liked this story VERY VERY VERY much!

I read through this and was AMAZED!

This Fan Fic has earned 5 out of 5 Stars!

*****
swartzvald chapter 6 . 7/9/2014
Panky, the phrase is "hanky panky". I don't even want to know what hanky pinky is...
swartzvald chapter 5 . 7/9/2014
"Crap meat"? That's a bit...specific, did she not want to use the good meat?
swartzvald chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
Ok it's does, not dose,
But apart from that it's a promiseing start.
Wolfang21 chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
This was an amazing story loved how u described the haunted house that i want to see it come to life, loved the romance struck my heart in a good way, since i am a romantic, and the ending acutely made me cry and I'm a man and im not afraid to say it
I'm a man and this story brought tears to my eyes u sir are one hell of a writer hope that u publish a book cause u have talent
Devil of Solitude chapter 12 . 7/2/2013
Loved it, really well done great story :)
MegaDarkly chapter 12 . 6/9/2013
Haha. Nice. The only thing that confused me was when Kitsune hit her head at the bwginning, didnt she lose her memory? I was deeply confused by that. If you can clear that up... it would be nice. Anyeay. Great story, I thought ut went pretty well.
Archangel Azrael chapter 12 . 3/25/2013
This was a very beautiful story, something I haven't seen done before and would really liked to have seen another story for motoko's wish.
Namegeorge chapter 12 . 12/18/2012
Great story and the ending is great looks like motoko is next 4 the ryd
The foxxx chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
um at the start of the anime meening 1998 naru is17/ kitsune is18/and kei is19 witch meens that kitsune is younger than kei not older also if naru is 13 kitsune would be 14 not 16 and kei shud be 15 also If naru is 13 that meens that your story thaks plase in 1994 well other than all the ages Bing wrong its seems like a good story. well just to get the others age then with going by 1998 start shinobu is13/ su is13/ motiko is15/ Sara is8/ mutsumei is20/ kanako is14/ tsruko is24/ haruka is27/ ema is8/
GuardEzio chapter 12 . 7/19/2012
Great story O.o really not expecting Kanako and Mie getting together though...plus im curious to see Motoko's wish now..though if all these strrys are linked AND all the girls (sans Naru) who like him (if its the manga then pretty much all of them xD) come to the same end as Kitsune dose here...there's ether gonna be a MASSIVE fight...of Keitaro (the lucky goit 3) will end up with a MASSIVE harem...

...-whispering- I put my vote down for the second one -slips $100 bill- thanks
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