Reviews for Love Forever
MewTwo and Mew chapter 28 . 5/17
The grammar was horrid, as was spelling and word placement. The plot was there-vaguely. But, I have to give you a hand for not giving up. I'm unsure if English is your first language, it explains a lot if it's not even if it doesn't excuse the grammar. But here's a small tip; plan out your chapters before you write them, so you know what's going to happen and when. The story feels rushed and jumbled up, or in some areas out of place. I suggest keeping track of what you want to happen and not overplaying a certain aspect of the story.
Bella cullen chapter 28 . 1/1
Pls continue
Guest chapter 27 . 3/30/2014
Okay this story should be rated T. Because of the threats that Rose says to Emmett. They were funny but still...
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
Finally!
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 2 . 3/15/2014
Fantastic!
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Interesting so far
twlightbella chapter 28 . 7/9/2013
Rosalie and Emmett have and son named Emjay Kerian and a daughter named Mia Hope twins and Alice and Jasper have a son named Joshua Mason and a daughter named Alyssa Isabella Whitlock twins and Esme and Carlisle have a daughter named Lilian Raine Cullen and Edward and Bella have their sons Jacob Black( adopted son) , Leah Clearwater(adopted daughter) , Quil( adopted son and Leah's imprint) , Mason Carlisle and Renesemee Carlie Cullen twins and Emmett Jasper and Charlie Jacob Cullen twins and Charlie and Sarah move in with Bella and Edward also.
carey1090 chapter 28 . 5/28/2012
Nice story.
crazy-chick-4life chapter 28 . 5/12/2012
Love it
Dragons-Twilight1992 chapter 28 . 5/11/2012
More:) Please this is very good:)
Edward's spouse chapter 28 . 5/11/2012
excellent. waiting for more.
lilmstran chapter 28 . 5/11/2012
Loved it

Keep going

Can't wait to read the next chapter
DracoDreams-2 chapter 28 . 5/11/2012
Really good story I am enjoying it Keep it up and don't let the flamers get you down
sibaruneko chapter 28 . 5/11/2012
yay babies! and Mason was so cute with Mia!
funnybb chapter 25 . 4/25/2012
this is good keep the chapters coming
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