Reviews for New Guys in Town
charverz chapter 1 . 1/22
Just a minor point: the Royal Navy wore blue uniforms.
FK chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Definitely think you should keep writing. It is a great beginning but I think the story needs a proper ending.
Good luck and thank you for the read.
EverydayClumsy chapter 1 . 1/8/2013

I really like this story, I would be awesome if you would write more :D. I also really like your style, it doesn't resemble to much the book but it somehow suits Frederick.

shepweir always chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
I truly enjoyed this insight into Captain Wentworth's mind. I love his character so much. The love story between Frederick and Anne is so unforgettable. I recently saw the 2007 version and have been completely hooked since. I want to say your Wentworth seemed so real and easy to relate to. Well done. I look forward to more Persuasion fan fics from you.
NeverQuitDreaming chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I love how you wrote Fred in this. And I liked that you included Fanny. I wish you would have had a bit more descriptive detail to it, but besides that, I thought it was very well written
Wendi 'Triplet Mom' Sotis chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
If only he had sent it...

Thanks for sharing this!
taswmom chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
I think you need to finish it! :)
ILoveTea chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I think it's a good beginning of a good story. Why don't you continue?
julinka chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I say: very nice story!

You draw a very beliveable picture of Wentworth in the time, when he went to sea and wanted to forget about Anne.

I liked the way you have integrated Harville into your story. He is Wentworth' best friend and he whould likely drag him to such an event to take Fredericks mind of Anne and do the hard thing and take the letter for his friends benefits. But It is so sad Frederick didn't send the letter...

I'm looking forward to more of your nice one-shots and stories.

(Yeah, I know, I'm a bad reader, cause I usually don't review... :-/ But today I'm in the mood and send you a generel review to your Jane Austen-stories (the other fandoms don't have my interest). They are a highlight to my day when you upload them. I can immerse myself into the story and let myself be in this time period and with the characters and be engrossed in them. You portray them so in tune of Austen that I can picture Austen herself writing them.)

So I say, keep up the good work :-)



P.S. Sorry for any mistakes, english is not my mother tongue...
kggirl21 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
So did someone mail the letter? I don't think it was Harry but who was it? Maybe you will have Anne and Frederick meet again earlier...
sadhappygirl chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Poor Frederick, he is so in love with Anne he can't enjoy himself with another female no matter how compatible they are...

I kinda wish he would have mailed that letter...

I love your stories on my favorite book, keep up the good work, you are very talented...