|Reviews for Us|
| debslmac chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
So sad but I loved it
| Sophiat chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I loved. And I cried.
So good this one-shot!
He was 34 years old when he died? He was young.
I really loved. You did an amazing job!
| Little-Angry-Kitten chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
So sad...but it's a good story anyway...
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
This is one of those perfect one shots
that grab you
you grab it and ride as you read like a great roller coaster.
like real life!
Hurts - so well!
| Emimusicly chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
wow what more can i say. that was the one the most beautiful things i have ever read. u made me cry. keep up the amazing work!
| oohthephysicist chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I definitely did not see that coming and the flood of emotions was too much to handle. You made me cry. That hardly ever happens.
I really enjoy your writing! :)
| HopeinaLovelessPlace chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Sometimes a story is too good and u can't not comment... shit I thikn you nearly gave me a heartattack a minute ago. Seriously I felt my heart jump or stopp or whatever when I read the word died... I love ur writing... Iread this lol and as I read the '93 part I saw a almost black and white movie... but idk if you get how strong a picture you painted at the end with her one the beach...
| twigs66 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
You are the master of the shocking ending! I Floved this fic, but then again I could totally relate and picture much of it...no Valencia HS huh? Whatev! Really great build, then a direct hit to the heart! Still reeling!
| dohagrl chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
he died?well that was sad...but really great story i liked the way you developed the characters...great job!
| Nrbl1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Wow! Didn't see that one coming! It's was sweet and adorable...
| TwilightNJonas4Ever chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Omg this was so amazing! But the ending was unexpected and made me want to cry :( great job on this :)
| Powermouse chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Wow, really great story.
The ending is kind of a shock and oh so sad, but that makes the story even better.
| BRANDY0925 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
GAHH, i think i just felt my heart break! that was...unexpected, great story!
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I loved it but you about killed me at the end but oh so good
| bonz245 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Beautiful! I'm tearing up.