Reviews for Us
debslmac chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
So sad but I loved it
Sophiat chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I loved. And I cried.

So good this one-shot!

He was 34 years old when he died? He was young.

I really loved. You did an amazing job!

xoxo
Little-Angry-Kitten chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
So sad...but it's a good story anyway...
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
This is one of those perfect one shots

that grab you

you grab it and ride as you read like a great roller coaster.

No Breaks

like real life!

Hurts - so well!

Reb
Emimusicly chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
wow what more can i say. that was the one the most beautiful things i have ever read. u made me cry. keep up the amazing work!
oohthephysicist chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
I definitely did not see that coming and the flood of emotions was too much to handle. You made me cry. That hardly ever happens.

I really enjoy your writing! :)
HopeinaLovelessPlace chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Sometimes a story is too good and u can't not comment... shit I thikn you nearly gave me a heartattack a minute ago. Seriously I felt my heart jump or stopp or whatever when I read the word died... I love ur writing... Iread this lol and as I read the '93 part I saw a almost black and white movie... but idk if you get how strong a picture you painted at the end with her one the beach...

amazing writing...

-Leafz
twigs66 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
You are the master of the shocking ending! I Floved this fic, but then again I could totally relate and picture much of it...no Valencia HS huh? Whatev! Really great build, then a direct hit to the heart! Still reeling!
dohagrl chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
he died?well that was sad...but really great story i liked the way you developed the characters...great job!
Nrbl1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Wow! Didn't see that one coming! It's was sweet and adorable...
TwilightNJonas4Ever chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Omg this was so amazing! But the ending was unexpected and made me want to cry :( great job on this :)
Powermouse chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Wow, really great story.

The ending is kind of a shock and oh so sad, but that makes the story even better.

Great work
BRANDY0925 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
GAHH, i think i just felt my heart break! that was...unexpected, great story!
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I loved it but you about killed me at the end but oh so good
bonz245 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Beautiful! I'm tearing up.

Thanks

Carol
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