Reviews for Peace
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
lol wow. that was awesome.
Lanaholic chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Haha.. nicely done!
DarXe chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I liked this one.
Thoughtsshouldnotbeinquotes chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Liked the story but the thoughts in quotes were confusing as a reader. Thoughts are not supposed to be in quotes, italic or not.
RestlessSoul03 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
:P I liked that is was in Maura's pov.
brwnsuga chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
ha! ha! ha!, freaking awesome.
charmed-darkangel chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Good work!
graywolf68 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Cute story, I'm glad Angela knocked and talked some sense into Jane.
Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
::snickers;: ohh ladies lol well done
Gatefan1 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Another great one from you!
angelfoo chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Loved it. You seem to really have the character voices down. I can clearly picture them throughout the story saying exactly what you've written. Thanks for posting.
linelm chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Great!
tuckp3 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
i really enjoyed this 3
Swishla chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I can just see Angela smacking Jane in the back of her head with the spoon. Have a bit of trouble with Jane going to her mom for advice/comfort but then who else would she go to? Great one shot. Thanks for sharing.
lilbit1016 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Very good loved it, well writen, kept me guessing until the very end, good job
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