Reviews for Falling For the Empth
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 9 . 6/9/2011
love it

:p
foxesaredemons chapter 3 . 4/1/2011
my real profile just to lazy to log in lol but this is so far a really great story
emmettandjasper'sgirl chapter 9 . 3/18/2011
great job!
ALLSTARCULLEN chapter 9 . 3/18/2011
That is really great!, I have read all of your chapters so far, but decided to review one for now...this is great. I'll look back and review the others!
Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 4 . 3/17/2011
Loosen up a bit...This is a good idea and a good story. Relax.
Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 3 . 3/17/2011
"Jasper! What the frig are you doing!" Edward asked pinning me down

He would actually SAY frig!
Deborah Stone- KarmabalanceDeb chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
Thank you for doing a good summary and not saying "This summary sucks." I hate that.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 9 . 3/17/2011
Good job. You are showing how Bella distrusts Edward now and she trusts Jasper.
Vane3131 chapter 9 . 3/17/2011
Honestly Edward you are a dumbass!However I cant wait for Jaspers version of Bellas birthday
XxgillyxX chapter 7 . 3/14/2011
please update
Camille chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
Yes, 50 is more realistic. I also see on the review count that this goal was met.
Camille chapter 3 . 1/24/2011
Finding a beta will help you reach 1000 reviews. I also suggest adding more action and dialogue into one chapter. The more detailed they are, the higher the chance that you will get a review.

Sorry I am anon, I am lazy and do not feel like logging in.

I hope my words of wisdom help you reach your goal.
ForksReverie chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Please have someone proofread for spelling at the very least. No matter how interesting a story can be, poor spelling and grammar can pull the reader right out of your "world"!

Empath

appreciate

your (not you're "you are")

criticism

Bear (not "bare")
IHeartEmoBoys chapter 7 . 1/22/2011
I luv it :) JasperBella Best stories ever.
angel04une chapter 7 . 1/22/2011
Uh oh what did edward say?
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