Reviews for Young Forever
CookieDemon chapter 5 . 3/1/2014
This was an awesome read. I loved it!
Wolfiewarrior chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
Plz plz plz plz plz plz continue this story I am in love with it it is amazing don't let a great story like this go to waste plz I mean so many people start an amazing story and then never finish it breaks my heart lol
jojo07 chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
Oh my god! I love it! You have to continue I really really love your story! Its cute(and its interesting I mean really) I say really a lot huh? Oh well, I have no sentence to describe how awesome your story is! Keep it up though and I'll be waiting for the update!?
Rose Tiger chapter 5 . 8/24/2012
I can't believe Naruto was so flirt with those hoochie mermaids!
Christopher Scott chapter 5 . 8/23/2012
Interesting. I hope Naruto and Hinata find Hanabi, or at least Konohamaru. I wonder where Neji and Inari are. The bit with the Ino and Karin mermaids was amusing. Ah, Naruto, so innocent that he doesn't fully understand the attempts at romantic passes. That last bit with Naruto promising to be there to help Hinata forever was very sweet. Truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
Leaf Ranger chapter 5 . 8/23/2012
hmmm, wonder what Tayuya will be? I hope not a pirate. It'd be cool if she was a Native. guess we'll see.

Overall, great chapter. Keep it up.
LiLyRoSe98 chapter 5 . 8/23/2012
''Forever'' Awwww so sweet! Update soon!
ihinata702 chapter 4 . 8/9/2012
well done well done applause
RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
awww cute chapter.
Christopher Scott chapter 4 . 5/18/2012
Whoa. That was some mood whiplash. Great chapter. I liked Konohamaru's interactions with Hanabi. Oh, dear. The pirates have Hanabi. I hope they can save her. Please update as soon a you find most , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
Rose Tiger chapter 4 . 5/18/2012
Keep-going!
Leaf Ranger chapter 4 . 5/18/2012
So Sakura told...I'm assuming Sasuke about Hinata, but Deidara and Sasori here got Hanabi instead. Well that's not good.

NIce chapter overall though.
NeverTake chapter 3 . 5/12/2012
Oh...My...God... I don't care what anyone else says or thinks but, this is the best story EVER! Hinata crossovers are hard to find especially one that are good, but this, this is magical! Please, please, please, PLEASE UPDATE!
Rose Tiger chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
How cute!
1nn0c3nc3-kun chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
This is so cute and awesome! Update soon! 3
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