Reviews for Heartless
Lily chapter 2 . 9/6/2014
Actually, I love vani who's so obssesed and in a twisted way ofc
Xiemea chapter 6 . 4/27/2014
That... would be awesome! Make 'Nobody,' please?!
Zakora-Korzaax chapter 6 . 12/22/2012
As Much as I Hate this Because My Oc Zakora Was Made for Van ... despite Her being Light ... the Fire Based addition To Terra , Van , Auqa , And Ven Crew Fell for Him ... besides That ... I FUCKING LOVE IT! I have a habit Of Becoming The victim when Reading these things ... so I Felt Like I ... was Sora ... I Felt every Instant ... heard every word ... Zakora And Korza(ax) Both Are jealous Of Sora :/ ... lol
MidnightxMusic chapter 6 . 10/24/2012
Damn, I enjoyed this story immensely! :D I thought that it was well written throughout the whole thing. Great job!

And I'd definitely love to see "Nobody" become a reality. I love both SoRoku and VanSo, so that story would be perfect for me. xD
Atariel Tsukai chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
That was very interesting, lol.

I had picked up on the rape being used to get Sora angry, just at the end, but your A/N explanation helped a lot too! )
Twilight Cardmistress chapter 6 . 4/4/2012
"so called"

Loooooool

...Now, i usually don't review these types of stories (though they are deliiiious). SHHHHH! XD i made an exception. Myes...i think i'm starting to like this Sorvani stories...yess..

but now i dont know what to say, so...
My Solitude chapter 6 . 3/4/2012
Interesting story. XD
Kira the cat chapter 6 . 11/25/2011
whew boy...im utterly speechless. mostly because its yaoi and it tends to do that to me. anyways i like. i read the story before this and i wanted to see how good the sequel was and lets just say you hit the nail on the head. not good at constructive criticism but my praise makes up for it...i think.
AnjoRemix chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
omg make a sequel i wanna read a threesome! . 3
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 6 . 8/15/2011
Wow, wasn't exspecting that. Hehe, Aww Vanitas, he's a good guy somewhere really really deep down. I wonder if Sora will ever love him back.

Fuwaaah! Now I'm into Vanitas/Sora! DAMN YOU!

I think Vanitas needs love, and lots of it!

Uwaaah, why is over TT
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 5 . 8/15/2011
Sora's self-realization is wonderfully described. You really feel for him when it dawn's on him that they're exactly alike. The laughing bit being the most powerful in my opinion.

*Still sulking over the fact that she didn't read this sooner*
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 4 . 8/15/2011
Aw, ickle bit of SoRoku in there made me smile.

Wow Vanitas is really going for it! Yay! I loved how Sora reacted to 'Kissing himself', I never thought of how strange it would for them both, I know how I want to have Ventus and Roxas react to being identical but I lessened the reaction for Vani and Sora 'coz of the different Hair and eye color.

Wow, I never thought of that, eye opener for sure, his reaction was so realistic!
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
0.0

Ooooooooooooooooooooh, Sora is so sweet!

Wah, he thgouht of Roxas TT sho cyute.

Again, this is so unique...WHY DIDN'T I READ IT BEFORE?
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
Rightio, so I like how you had Xion in here, (what did you do to Roxas...?) Vanitas- I find him so reaslistic, I can see him being so intrigued by Sora that he'd be this possessive, all in all I didn't notice any mistakes (waah, mine are full of 'em)

Where'd you come up with this? I love it so frickin' much!
xxxRoxenxxx chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Lol Pedo rofl. Vanitas is just nooooot the pedo type bwaha, pervy yeah...pedo? Nooooooooo

"Lies, all lies*

Omg...what happened to Vanitas actually? I hope we see him again in KH3 when it comes out, and that he's allowed to LIVE!

oops...I went off topic, I shall read more..and, be more constructive :P
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