awww my first sherlock fic-thing! ok. this was very cute. im in

Just finished. And ! This was so... cute? Idk :D This was awesome.

sweet :) but maybe more than just two chapters out of ten, where they are actually "together" would be more balanced. but you write very well :)

Ohmygod. YES. LOVE IT!

I think this is the second or third time I've read this particular story. I've been a fan of this pairing since I first saw the show and I really enjoy how you've played out their romance. Thank you for writing it and posting it and allowing me the joy of reading it through.

Awesome! Love your rendition of the characters.

This is actually seriously cute

This was so sweet. I loved it.

Still want to know what Mycroft told John at the end of Chapter 7 though ;)

Just getting better - stronger. I was sorry that John's opening discussion was nothing more than more homophobic reiteration; it seemed like a great place to take it to another level. Sometimes skipping over the obvious and going for metaphor works, or perhaps skipping the meme scene and jump to the kiss and What Comes Next. Not sex! - but what comes next. A perfectly clear moment like that to create a historic scene in, and so few writers take it!

Now that... that was writing. There were hints before, but this chapter nailed it. Excellent timing.

This... Was really something. In a good way.

I LOVE THIS

I'm laughing my head off and my mother is giving me strange looks. XD XD XD Great job!
-Ruby

That. was. Amazing. I have never seen someone pull off Johnlock so beautifully and smoothly. Pure genius. Wow.

I thought this was a great story and I am really happy I stumbled across it. I don't normally read fics for Sherlock on fanfic anymore, but it was linked to on fanlore so I thought, "Why not?" Needless to say, I'm really happy I decided to read this.

I think the characterization is very nice and I appreciate the relationship between them. It's quite nice.

Thank you for writing.

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