Reviews for Future Seer
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
... I WANT MORE. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. PLEASE.
Blazing Romance chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
nice nice nice nice nice nice

i sssooooo llooovvveee this story

please make more :D
ILikeShorts chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
The idea of Morty's hunt for Ho-Oh destroying his future is genius and I'd love to see it taken a bit further... it definitely feels like a prologue to something, which I guess is why you've got reviewers asking for the next chapter.

This is one of those oneshots that works perfectly well as is, but you read it and can't help but want more. It was fantastic, and the ending definitely worked, but the idea that it's already over is a little bit painful. XD

Loved it, though. It's kind of creepy and beautiful at the same time... I wish I could think of a better way to phrase that, but I'm sure you get the idea.
Snoaz chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This was lovely eerie. Can't remember having read something about these two before, which surprises me now. Though they're both psychics/seers, they're still opposites in a certain way: Sabrina the 'wrong' kind of magic, and Morty the 'good' kind. You did a good job at illustrating that.

"Her long hair whipped around her, giving her the look of a fallen angel." - loved this description.

"It was written in the stars long before our meeting, Morty. It was written in the book of death, of life, of the future." - therepetition really works well, it gives this sort of creepy feeling to the fic; to Sabrina herself.

Her visit just to tell him this still seems a bit random, though, and I would have liked to see some more interaction - but nonetheless, great writing!

~Snoaz
IanDonyer -ChrisAvrich chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
... Wow. Intense.
BookWorm2011 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
that was a really good chapter! haha i cant wait til the nxt chapter! well i gotta go cya!
Jnnfr chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Well written, but are you going to write more? I would love to see what happens next, its quite interesting.
ObsessedwithBirds chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I can has you continue?

This is cute. Like a love-hate relationship XD
bijou chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Hmmm, this was well written, though I don't know what to think of it. I don't quite know what just happened, to be honest haha.

But I liked "The mark of death." Very nice.

x bijou.