|Reviews for Seh and Hok|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/22
I love this chapter! you did such a good job describing what was going one, and you used some of my favorite character! only problem is that I cant figure out what time period it is placed in. Overall it is a great fanfic!
| Victoria chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
I think this 'familiar person' should be Tonglong because you said that he was following Hok. You're story is great! Make it dramatic...
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
It should be Tsung I think
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
I like it I think it gives a good description of each persons perspective.
| Mushu chapter 3 . 6/12/2011
I love Hok x Seh fanfics, but I thought Hok was always calm? I didn't know she got angry all of a sudden...
Anyways, I think this is very good! Keep it up!
| Kiwwi chapter 3 . 4/25/2011
CONTINUE PLEASE! I LOVE THIS COUPLE! TT
| aaaa chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
| EmpressOfSarcasm chapter 2 . 1/10/2011
It's really good, but I do have a few problems with it.
First, you should really watch what tense you're using- past tense, present tense, stuff like that. Also, what point of view you're using- first, second (though uncommon), or third. Stuff like that can make it really confusing. But it was really good, and you should be proud of your story.
| EmpressOfSarcasm chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I'm glad to see that more people are adding stuff to the Five Ancestors catagory. It gets so little attention... Anyway, good fic!