Reviews for A Heartbeat, A Home
theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
I like the way you send Alex and Shaz on opposite journeys, so that Alex starts out believing in romance and Shaz ends up in belieiving in it, even when she has lost it. And you are brutal, but very honest, in enumerating Gene's limitations as a lover. Marvellous stuff, like all your stories.
Eleantris chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
This was fantastic! It flowed effortlessly and made really beautiful reading. The repetition, but in different contexts (Alex and Shaz) was brilliant too. All in all, I loved it!

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sash queen of the jungle chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Wow thanks for writing. Very realistic and honest about the limitations Alex comes to realise about loving gene. Thanks again.