Reviews for Of Western Stars
MRGwrites chapter 10 . 12/10/2023
WTF is everyone in this story useless?
MRGwrites chapter 9 . 12/10/2023
TF is wrong with you?!
geumsappa6 chapter 1 . 1/15/2023
32화까지 봄
The8thMarauder chapter 18 . 12/11/2022
This is a pile of trash. Words vomitted out A/N mixed with chapters all jumbled together with no break. Talk about lazy can’t even hit enter to create breaks between paragraphs and notes. Pointless short chapters with more notes than actual story. SKIP
The8thMarauder chapter 3 . 12/10/2022
Squibs cant be potion teachers just fyi
Guest chapter 5 . 9/6/2022
Good
hilarity chapter 1 . 1/22/2022
It will be almost twenty years since I first read this, and I'm SURE you no longer check this account (I don't look at my reviews anymore, either), but I just wanted to drop a line in here thanking you for keeping these stories up.

Sirius Harry angst FOREVEERRRR
Guest chapter 33 . 11/17/2021
To be honest, this Harry is really annoying. I know he’s been abused, but he’s seen how much Sirius has done for him, and even has come to trust Sirius, why did he insist that he should sleep in the cupboard when he saw his new room? Too stubborn thinking not only will not let me love him, but will let me think he has a mental problem
Guest chapter 16 . 11/16/2021
I know Harry has been abused, but his endless performance of anxiety is really annoying. Sirius has been as friendly and helpful as he can be. Can he stop cowering
Guest chapter 12 . 11/16/2021
Too much describtion of Harry’s abuse can feel deliberate, and can lead to reading fatigue. And the excessive violence makes the story unreal, and if it happened, Harry would have already been beaten to death
Ward chapter 9 . 9/30/2021
I realize this was written years ago but here goes: All of your chapters are short. Well written to be sure, but short. Your Author's notes/comments at the end of chapter are longer than the chapters themselves. You have a natural talent for writing it seems. Either combine some chapters, elaborate a bit more on your current character's action/thoughts, or put the notes/comments elsewhere.

Not a flaming revue by any means, just structural criticism. You are creating a great story here and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Guest chapter 33 . 6/16/2021
OMG! LOL, that last line had me in tears!
Guest chapter 27 . 6/16/2021
No! Remus come in! Take Harry and go! *grins devilishly* What about Sirius and Wormtail, you ask? Oh, why separate 2 good friends? Even if they are in a murdering frenzy and are on the run from the law ... *shrugs* Oh well, whatever.
Guest chapter 26 . 6/16/2021
Argh! White rat? Wormtail, I will- quoted -skin, kill, eat, wear you!
Guest chapter 19 . 6/16/2021
Oooh! Harry's getting *creepy* again!
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