Reviews for Of Western Stars
Poucheene chapter 1 . 8/11/2020
I remember how i thought at 7 years old...
Rose chapter 16 . 8/3/2020
Can you say anything positive about your writing? This story is amazing! But your pessimistic author notes are hard to read.
MayaniMoon chapter 1 . 7/15/2020
I'd give this fanfic a 4.7/10. This fanfic really disappointed me. I was so excited to read it beacuse the summary sounded amazing, it was complete, and was over 100k pages. When I first started this fanfic I was every excited, but by the time I got to the end I was very disappointed. Every chapter I read just made me annoyed. I didnt really like the plot or the way the time and povs jump around. One thing really annoyed/disappointed me was that the chapters were really short. By chapter, I mean the 25-60 percent (depending on the chapter) of the chapter that was devoted to the plot. Not the 40-75 percent (depending on the chapter) of the chapter that was devoted to the questions (?). I love reading really long Fanfics, so by the time I was ten chapters in and realized that the 110k pages were incorrect really disappointed me. I was goning to rate this fanfic higher but then I thought about all rlthe better ones I read. Sorry if this offends you or hurts your feelings but I'm trying to as honest as possible so that you can grow as a writer. Or you could ignore and about you business. At the end of the day this is my opinion.
Guest chapter 31 . 6/1/2020
He's free

They're alive

I'm sorry

U r da best
Guest chapter 30 . 6/1/2020
I am internally screaming curse words
Guest chapter 29 . 6/1/2020
...
Pettigrew is a little piece of shit
Guest chapter 28 . 6/1/2020
If he is dead, (Sirius or Harry) I will about curse words to any day I ever see and kill them all with lung puncturing. :(
Guest chapter 27 . 6/1/2020
NO! HE WILL NOT! AZKABAN IS A- PETER- little piece of shit...
Guest chapter 26 . 6/1/2020
KILL PETER NOW HE WILL KILL HARRY OR WORSE
Guest chapter 26 . 6/1/2020
Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait PETER?
Guest chapter 23 . 6/1/2020
*screams* NOOO
Guest chapter 22 . 6/1/2020
'-' please let this end well I'm hooked
Guest chapter 19 . 6/1/2020
Not sure if that happened or not
Guest chapter 17 . 6/1/2020
Gasp
Guest chapter 11 . 6/1/2020
When they ask you how you are and you just have to say that you're fine, when you're being not really fine, but you can't get into it because they'd never understand...
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