This is one of those stories that pulls you in right away whether it’s the characters, the vibe, or the ideas behind it. It’s fun, it’s thoughtful, and it really sticks with matter what you’re into, there’s something here that’ll catch your eye.

...Over a decade later and the bit with Ron, the spiders, and the mis-cast spell is still some of the funniest shit I've ever come across.

Nice ending
Good set-up for a sequel

Ron is hilarious in this

"One could almost see the misshapen cogs turn, lubricated by grease, yet clogged with hash browns." HAHAHAHA, THAT'S HILARIOUS! HAHAHA!

They’re 12 so I will just NOPE out here

I love it!

I forgot how much I love this chapter. It has it all; romance, snake skin, wacky whiskered wizards and RON the red death to spiders! cue synthesized 80s end game solo...

Couldn’t help but burst into laughter every now and then. A thoroughly entertaining story. Thanks.

I don't know how I found this. I don't know if you're still writing. but dear lord I love you (and maybe in that creepy stalker way). I haven't laughed so hard or out loud (in public. it's fun in quiet places) in forever. bravo!

I love tikka masala and curry...but unfortunately at 40 Indian food tends to cause quite the rebellion in my tummy LOL!

are you alright? the story started ok, then continued as funny, now it turns out more like a crazy... ஐ cant believe it... its rubbish... and a evil diary teaching... ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

A fun read and an interesting idea about the diary.

The next line there should be " Wait, what?" They're kids, though.

If this is a good story so far and I look forward to reading the rest of your tale.