Reviews for If Wishes Were Fishes
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This is remarkable verse (and I'm not even familiar with the source material.) You have an awesome command of verse forms and blank verse and make it work for your content, instead of fighting against it. Loved it x
Lilith King chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I loved the style you wrote in. I just finished Banana Fish a few hours ago and so I almost had to cry reading your story, knowing all those things Eiji dreamed about will never happen. I still liked your story a lot, not only because it was well written but also for it's touching content.
Angela Pirate Ryoko chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Congratulations on posting the first BF fic of 2011!

This is lovely. I like Eiji's voice and the little details you added - like the natto and the shoes and chopsticks - to flesh it out into something real. And I especially love the futon, how you hint that there may be more between Ash and Eiji, but how even Eiji isn't able to say it straight out. Lovely.