Reviews for A Boon for Bill |
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EliteShadow chapter 21 . 5/24 love this story please keep up the great work i look foreword to reading more of this story please i hope to see more updates soon keep on writing please! |
DerLaCroix chapter 21 . 4/13 Always a pleasure to reread this storyI hope the muse will stop being a prude, soon. |
pincho chapter 10 . 3/21 Ok was completely lost...is there a chapter or whole section missing? |
pincho chapter 9 . 3/21 Love the hilarity of the chastity spell but find it hard to believe that Fleur, Hermione and or Bill don't know how to counter it. It's not like Molly hides what she is doing and casts out loud to boot. |
MorphCross chapter 21 . 2/28 Hey Canon, just a heads up, aerie2 has plagiarized at least Chapter One of your story. I would hop on the report train to see them booted from . |
FrostyBehemoth chapter 9 . 2/5 Look, this fuckimg ruined it. Harry and Hermione added there blood/clock hand to the Weasley clock. HERE, I'LL GIVE YOU MY BLOOD FOR A FUCKING TRACKING SPELL. Fuck off. And the real problem is not the fact that he did it. ITS NOT WE GOT NOTHING FROM HIM No thoughts, conversations, decision making, FUCKING NOTHING. Just, oh we need your blood for our tracker. Hand it over. no aversion to the fact THEY HAVE HIS BLOOD. THE BLOOD THAT WAS USED THE RESURRECT THE DARK FUCKING LORD. THAT COULD BE USED FOR ANYTHING. You've ruined it. You've actually managed to ruin it. Fuck you. |
tawnya.penner chapter 18 . 12/29/2023 o on every word of this story sofar ! |
TBearTech chapter 7 . 12/3/2023 The joke was perfect. Typical coarse humor for a dangerous profession. Thank you for writing. -C |
PotterThinker chapter 21 . 11/30/2023 Door 2 sounds like fun. |
Guddu15 chapter 21 . 11/12/2023 It's been an amazing story so far. Enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for the next part. Hope it ain't discontinued. |
Detsella Morningdew chapter 1 . 10/25/2023 Yeah, Hermione got really flanderized later on. And defined by plot convenience instead of character. |
moonprincess97524 chapter 20 . 10/1/2023 Oh my, what a way to end the chapter. |
Simianpower chapter 1 . 9/4/2023 This has got to be the slowest, most boring fic I've ever read. I've tried it twice now, the first time giving up at chapter five, and the second early in chapter seven. It's SO REPETITIVE! The entire story is Molly Weasley being an overbearing prude and everyone else just doing her bidding like lemmings with no wills of their own. That's it. Nothing else happens. No action. No plot development. Minimal character development and worldbuilding. Lots of cockblocking. Tens of thousands of words covering a week or two where nothing happens. Even chopped down by 80% this would still remain pointless and boring. This author is usually better than this story shows, but this one is entirely skippable. |
Runecutter chapter 21 . 8/30/2023 Exit stage left, chased by a bear |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/23/2023 You glorious maniac you. That Animal House reference was hilarious. |