Reviews for The Parallel: Path of Demons
Rory chapter 19 . 3/13
What kind of chapter ending is that. If you need help email me at also the nc17 stuff for halo abc lol the lemon stuff is funny as hell
Horizon Unsheathed chapter 19 . 3/1
I love how you run your conversations. They're absolutely hilarious
Happy1K1nob1 chapter 19 . 11/9/2014
I have only one thing I could possibly say, beyond that the Infected are hilarious, as was John's reaction to Jesus, and you are a really good writer. And that is

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I WANT YOU TO POST MORE NOW!
or at your earliest possible convenience.

(Hope that made you laugh, and I'll try to finish off the current chapter of my newest story [typing it up] before I read anything more of yours. Otherwise, awesomeness will likely distract me, and keep me from doing it.)
Kinrai chapter 18 . 8/17/2014
You know, I stumbled across this video while on youtube, and though it'd be perfect for the spartans theme song. Not just chief, all of them. Here it is
watch?vrdB6TGonTms#t31

And, incase FFN decides to blank it out, I'll give the id at the end.
rdB6TGonTms

Cheers, TTFN
Dragonheart chapter 18 . 8/7/2014
You met the son of God and ran away
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Inuyoukai52 chapter 18 . 7/2/2014
I laughed way too hard at the end of this chapter. I'm a Catholic myself, so this was a highly amusing thought to me XD
That-Other-One chapter 18 . 6/25/2014
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Space-Jesus can give no fucks!
Heheheh-
Hehe-
Ha.
To be honest, though, I actually started laughing at that. For some reason, god/Jesus/whatever-the-fuck just blowing them off after freaking them out makes me giggle.
Smeehan98 chapter 18 . 6/24/2014
I swear this fic gets wackier by the chapter. And I love it,
Spartan000-B TheUnknownWarrior chapter 18 . 6/24/2014
Jesus christ? wow...didn't see that one coming...
Spartan Ninja chapter 18 . 6/23/2014
That was... Unexpected to say the least. Jesus Christ, they met Jesus Christ. And he spoke to them! Now that's scary.
a lazy noob chapter 18 . 6/23/2014
huh... well that was interesting... kinda strange, but what is one to expect from this story?
saberstorm chapter 18 . 6/23/2014
I LOL'ED SOOO HARD!

I think He would SO do THAT!
MelodiDam chapter 18 . 6/23/2014
Okay, I loved your fanfiction reference! And I appreciate your Jesus Christ insert, I think you did well on that front.
DragoLord19D chapter 18 . 6/23/2014
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*Walks off cursing up a storm*
ShatteredMirage chapter 17 . 2/12/2014
Hmm... not a bad chapter.

Overall though, the story confused the hell out of me - with its random jumps through time.

As a side-note, thankfully your writing has gotten better.
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