|Reviews for Raw Blossom|
| jeskasaurus93 chapter 29 . 11/26
I know it's been like forever since you've updated but I just found this story and love it. I so hope you one day begin updating it again.
| wizardfantasy chapter 29 . 11/12
by far the best story in this category! you should come back to it!
| Esther chapter 29 . 10/23
Omgnesssss what a cliffhanger! ! Where is more of this? ? Will there be more? It's so good!
| Guest chapter 29 . 3/25
Just discovered this story and it is crazy good so intense I hope we get to find out what happens!
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/17
I read everything in one sitting... I just couldn't stop! That's why I'm so sad there hasn't been an update in such a long time. Please don't stop writing, your style is excellent and I really want to read more!
| closetohappiness chapter 29 . 6/18/2015
Please give us more of these fantastic story, you portrait the characters beautifully, and sayury acts of love and devotion, thank you, I'll be looking forward to any new updates. ( I hope hatsumomo dies a very painful dead, butbthe baby survives, an pumpkin to become a the cheapest prostitute on all japan)
| al2010 chapter 29 . 5/8/2015
I really like your story! I hope that Nobu forgives Sayuri for what she did because she did it for him. Can't wait to read more!
| Brazen Hussy chapter 29 . 4/21/2015
We need to find Nobu asap!
| Brazen Hussy chapter 28 . 3/10/2015
Oh dear, this won't be fun...
| That Crazy Halo Girl chapter 27 . 2/25/2015
I get so excited when this updates! I am sitting on pins and needles waiting to see what happens with Nobu. Can't wait for the next update.
| aghamora chapter 27 . 2/25/2015
Oh I've got a bad feeling about this...we all know what happened in the book when Sayuri gave herself to a man Nobu hated. I don't think he'll see it as her making a sacrifice to free him, and I really hope Sayuri doesn't ruin everything between them. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update!
| saz89 chapter 26 . 1/24/2015
I'm a little late to this story but WOW! I love it! You write so well :-) although leaving it on a cliff ... eek! Hope you write more soon
I just hope nobu and Sayuri are reunited soon!
| m2r2a chapter 26 . 1/23/2015
I'm hooked! I read your story in about 3 hours and I can't wait for more!
| Brazen Hussy chapter 26 . 1/16/2015
I had a feeling it was bad news!
| aghamora chapter 25 . 1/14/2015
I read through this story a few days ago, and I must say I've really liked it so far! I'm so so glad to see someone else writing Nobu/Sayuri, because to me the pairing makes far more sense than Sayuri and the Chairman ever did, and we see so much more of Nobu in the novel than we do the Chairman. Throughout the book there were so many hints that Nobu was Sayuri's true destiny, that they had this deep karmic bond lasting a lifetime, and in the end he gets pushed aside without being hardly mentioned at all toward the end of the novel, like he never existed! It just doesn't make sense to me, and so I've really enjoyed this exploration into what their relationship could have been like. Though we haven't seen romance yet, I hope some is coming soon! I can understand Sayuri's wanting to hurt Nobu by remaining in Kyoto, though I'm not sure she would have realistically risked her life to do it. But it has made for a far more interesting alternative plot than the one in the novel, and I can well imagine how furious Nobu will be whenever he gets out of the trouble he is in and manages to see her again. The only critique I really have - and this is just a tiny nit-picky thing - is that Mother wouldn't talk about Nobu using his given name Toshikazu; she'd use his surname Nobu instead. It's just a cultural thing.
Overall, I'm really enjoying this fic! Since the book came out so long ago the fandom consists of approximately five people and a shoelace, so we writers have to band together! Update soon; I can't wait for more :)
PS I apologize if this is one massive block of text. There is no way to separate paragraphs on mobile haha