|Reviews for Chainmail|
| Lunar Xylop chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I knew it! I knew it would be Jasper!
I like your story, I love your Belle, she is sooo right
| animeloverxoxo chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
TOTALLY saw that coming...prob because i am sorta pro-jasper...haha. is there a sequel to this? that dollar bill thing is so sweet! Please PM me if you are writing a longer story based off of this :D
| Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I have two words: TOTALLY UNEXPECTED! but still awesome!
| TheFaintHeart chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Loved this. I'm a non-canon girl at heart so having Jasper be the one to write the poem made me smile. I had a feeling it was him, especially with the lines:
And I can't help but wonder…
Was it I that caused it,
I really hope this is continued, I feel like there might be a little forshadowing going on at the end of the poem:
Your eternity was…
Actually meant with me.
Please, if you plan to continue this, send me a PM (after the contest) so I can continue reading.
Good luck in the contest!
| rubyred21 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
But it shud have been edward at end. :P lol
| TwiAggie94 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Interesting twist! Hope there may be a chap 2
| JavaMasta chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Brilliant! The creepy feeling that Bella was getting ... I still have it, even after I've finished reading.
| VampChick76 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Jasper? He was meant for her? Wow, did not see that coming! Awesome, love it!
| erika shoval chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
tres fort,tres bon