|Reviews for Lines on Paper|
| Death by Nutella chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
:O Wow. God. You are a genius.
I just read over chapter 2 cuz someone mentioned it in a review... Wow. You're really good. :O
| Death by Nutella chapter 15 . 8/27/2011
Just skimmed over it quickly so... Bella DID kill Claire, Leah is Bella. She's a pathological liar. Edward killed Emmett because of Rosalie. Edward killed Bella. Bella and Emmett keep Edward company. he's imagining them. Correct?
| Death by Nutella chapter 16 . 8/27/2011
I'd like to tell you that I understood that perfectly. But i didn't. i think i got it. But... wow. That was amazing. so clever and the detail you put in was amazing Wow.
| phoebelicious chapter 16 . 5/10/2011
Well done. Really different story.
| phoebelicious chapter 15 . 5/10/2011
| phoebelicious chapter 14 . 5/10/2011
I don't know who to be more afraid of at the moment, Bella or Edward.
| phoebelicious chapter 13 . 5/10/2011
| phoebelicious chapter 12 . 5/10/2011
Loved it...off to find out what happens next.
| phoebelicious chapter 11 . 5/10/2011
I'm not liking the thoughts I have in my head right now.
| phoebelicious chapter 10 . 5/8/2011
I had to read that twice to try and make sense of it
| phoebelicious chapter 9 . 5/8/2011
| phoebelicious chapter 8 . 5/8/2011
Emmett's not real...
| phoebelicious chapter 7 . 5/8/2011
I have theories but nothing I'm willing to commit to...
| phoebelicious chapter 6 . 5/8/2011
off to read more before I head to bed
| phoebelicious chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
I need more of Edward's past