Wow - beautifully written! Thanx for sharing!

Wow. This was so damn hot. Thank you, I needed that. ;)

No words for how superbly awesome this was. So sad it was a one shot.

Blessings to you in all your future endeavors, literary and otherwise!

-BMW

Damn... I'd love to read more about these three. Thanks for sharing this.

Oh Dang! This was hot af! Seriously loved the coupling! !

I don't usually read slash, but this was really good and well done.

That was spectacular! I floved this one. So effing yummy. I love that she'd been in love with Edward, and he with her, when his father moving put their love on hold, awaiting the day that they'd find each other all over again. You could tell that this was the beginning of forever for these three. The love was already there for Bella with Jasper, of course, and for Bella with Edward. You could tell the love came right back for Edward with Bella. It's only a matter of time that Edward and Jasper fall in love with each other as wel. So good. So very, very good.

Omg , Soapy that,was,so hot. Like really smexy fuck hawt. I read a lot of E & B Ffn although truthfully, I'm a slut for E & J (Jasper, not Jacob, eww) but this was a nice compromise betweenthe two I love your stories, there, are a couple E&B that I really miss, both with Edward as a Dom and bringing Bella into the community. Favorite scene, out picnicking together, Edward tying Bella to a tree and eating her out. Smoking hot. I can't recall titles. This was a great one shot. Ty

Although I understand your wanting to leave this at a one-shot, I can't help wanting more from these three. :-)

Hi, okay I didn't read this cause I just wanted to get back to you since your Pm is disable (sorry, but not sorry).
I really love your words, and I hope you'll find the motivation to finish some of your exciting fic, like:
"Within Reach"
Well I'm just a horny reader who missed your words and can't speak english very well, but hey, I speak an universal language, "beer" xD
I hope you are fine and the life you live is great! That, is the worst I wish you :p
Drop a line to tell me "Fuq off" or "I'm so in love with you"
Till then,
Take care of you *mwah*
Hira

Awesome!

that was intense!

I liked!

Never read anything like that. Wow!

HOOOT!