|Reviews for Undisclosed Desires|
| annaharding chapter 1 . 1/5
Wow - beautifully written! Thanx for sharing!
| CoppertopJ chapter 1 . 6/10/2020
Wow. This was so damn hot. Thank you, I needed that. ;)
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 1 . 4/29/2020
No words for how superbly awesome this was. So sad it was a one shot.
Blessings to you in all your future endeavors, literary and otherwise!
| CSG chapter 1 . 12/6/2017
Damn... I'd love to read more about these three. Thanks for sharing this.
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
Oh Dang! This was hot af! Seriously loved the coupling! !
| divyvicki chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
I don't usually read slash, but this was really good and well done.
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
That was spectacular! I floved this one. So effing yummy. I love that she'd been in love with Edward, and he with her, when his father moving put their love on hold, awaiting the day that they'd find each other all over again. You could tell that this was the beginning of forever for these three. The love was already there for Bella with Jasper, of course, and for Bella with Edward. You could tell the love came right back for Edward with Bella. It's only a matter of time that Edward and Jasper fall in love with each other as wel. So good. So very, very good.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
Omg , Soapy that,was,so hot. Like really smexy fuck hawt. I read a lot of E & B Ffn although truthfully, I'm a slut for E & J (Jasper, not Jacob, eww) but this was a nice compromise betweenthe two I love your stories, there, are a couple E&B that I really miss, both with Edward as a Dom and bringing Bella into the community. Favorite scene, out picnicking together, Edward tying Bella to a tree and eating her out. Smoking hot. I can't recall titles. This was a great one shot. Ty
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Although I understand your wanting to leave this at a one-shot, I can't help wanting more from these three. :-)
| HiraFrance chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Hi, okay I didn't read this cause I just wanted to get back to you since your Pm is disable (sorry, but not sorry).
I really love your words, and I hope you'll find the motivation to finish some of your exciting fic, like:
Well I'm just a horny reader who missed your words and can't speak english very well, but hey, I speak an universal language, "beer" xD
I hope you are fine and the life you live is great! That, is the worst I wish you :p
Drop a line to tell me "Fuq off" or "I'm so in love with you"
Take care of you *mwah*
| JD Thorn chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
| robertpatzlover09 chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
that was intense!
| Laene Victor chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
| Payton79 chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
Never read anything like that. Wow!
| emmettandme chapter 1 . 6/15/2014